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PostSubject: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyWed Aug 25, 2010 6:18 pm

[color=#000000]Basic Information

Name: Kurokon Shikyo

Actual Age: 6845

Appeared Age: 25

Gender: male

Looks: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) Uchiha_Madara_by_j3fton

Personality: While many beleive he is young, and foolish he is older than any known being, he counts each life for his total age, since he can remember every life he has ever had. He still retains wolf characteristics, and is very protective, he is calm, and collective, known for his insanity and cruelness. He has been known to go beserk in many situations.

Sexuality: Bisexual

Relationship Status: Single

[color=#000000]Mask Information

Name: Kurohime

Manifestation: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) 152492-1_super

Unique Ability: Cero: Vizard gain access to certain Hollow abilities, such as the Cero blast; However, only Shinji, Hiyori and Mashiro have been seen using it.

Power Augmentation: With the acquisition of the mask through the subjugation of one's inner Hollow, Vizard gain access to an additional and separate source of power - aside from the Shinigami powers they already possess - Hollow powers. The accumulation of both powers greatly augments their powers beyond what a Shinigami and/or Hollow alone would be capable of.
Mask Protection: Body damage can seemingly be ignored while wearing their masks, as demonstrated by Ichigo's Hollow during his unwilling transformations.
Reiryoku Enhancement: Vizard have dual spiritual power of both Shinigami and Hollow, which enhances their abilities.

Telekinesis: Vizard apparently hold varying degrees of telekinesis; For example, Ichigo, in his new Hollowfied form, has employed this ability to call forth his Zanpakutō with a mere flick of the wrist.
High-Speed Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs. Only Menos-class Hollows have demonstrated this ability. Ulquiorra states that most Arrancar gave up Regeneration for far greater strength.

Hollow Mask Appearance: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) My_mas10

Duration: 10

[color=#000000]Resurrecion Information

Name: True God of Death

Represent: Death

Family: Death

Looks: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) Angel_of_Death

[color=#000000]Techniques

Name: Inari

State: Mangekyou

Description: Inari is the ability to completely shapeshift. This ability disables use of other techniques until he changes back. He can also become other things like animals or plants, while retaining his normal form, this cannot be disrupted and also changes the voice. This lasts one tenth of his stanima, and takes two posts for it to work fully, first is voice, then shape.

Name: Raiden

State: Mangekyou

Description: Raiden is the ability to make and control a red lightning that can blind and attack enemies, without sound. Kensei can hold this for some time due to his natural lightning reiatsu. This technique can also be used to make weapons and shields, letting kensei fight in his bankai with two swords or one sword and one shield. It takes only one post to form the lightning into weapons, and lasts for ten posts, but he cannot use it for 2 pages or 30 posts

Name: Tsukiyomi

State: Mangekyou

Description: Tsukiyomi requires eye contact to be performed. When Kensei uses it, he is able to make the move seem to last for days when in fact it only lasts a few moments. This is be used to travel into others mind, but only those willing. This bypasses immunity to illusions. The length depends on the other person's choice, this can only be used once per topic.

Name: Death's Touch

State: Resurrecion, Passive

Description: When Kensei touches flesh, it gives off the pain as if it was burning and decaying slowly, unfortunately Kurokon must keep his hand where it is or it immidiatly stops. It does no true Physical harm though.

[color=#000000]Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Shekkeikegan

Zanpakuto Looks: A mideval english claymore.

Zanpakuto Description: Heated/electricified blade when charged with reiatsu.

Released Zanpakuto Description: Kurokon has the ability, in shikai, to control fire and lightning, almost perfectly, meaning he can make it form basic shapes with little though, and with great control he can make it into complex designs and patterns used to trick an oponenet. He naturally gains a resistance to fire and lightning, as such, normal 300 degree farenhieght fire would be nothing to him, and enough to eltrocute a normal person would be like cutting his hand off, in terms of pain.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Energize, Shekkeikegan

Released Zanpakuto Looks: Two of these. Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) P1009680

[color=#000000]Bankai Information

Do you want your character to have bankai: Yes Obviously

Bankai Description: While in Bankai Kurokon cannot be harmed by heat or electricity, unless with greater reiatsu than his own. He can now fully control the fire and lightning with incredible range, going up to one hundred feet, and it becomes as fast as he is. His fire also begins to become as hot as lava, while still remaining fire, and his lightning becomes as powerful as one tenth of a lightning ball.

Bankai Looks: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) Fire_d10

[color=#000000]History and RP sample

History: The very first thing he remembers is being a wolf like hollow, over one billion years ago, when he acheived his ability of rememberence. He was killed by another hollow, and when the hollow became a menos his personality took over. He was effectively the first Vasto lordes ever, when he became vasto his form changed into a death like look. He was killed by the first shinigami in a battle killing them both.
He was then turned into a shinigami, and started thinking about his life, he rose through the ranks fast, mostly due to his power. He was the first "Kenpachi" ever, known mostly for his strength and reiatsu at the time, while now he is well balanced.
He was eventually reincarnated as Kensei tenkai. In this life he was a royal guard for Emporer Xiànzōng. The Emporer had heard of an Island said to be peaceful and decided to see it for himself. He traveled east, landing in japan with his five bodyguards. They were attacked by bandits and the other four body guards died, one of wounds, and the rest in the fight. Desperate for help The emporer and he went to the nearest town and searched for a ship, luckily the town was also a port, so they found it rather quick. They left heading back to china, when the emporer betrayed him, because he thought he was going to assasinate him. A small army of twenty attacked him, all of the samurai. Now he wasnt the Emporer's body guard for nothing as he was able to take down ten of them but eventually got too tired to keep fighting. He knew he had only one chance and jumped overboard.
He was found by a woman on a small island and rescued. He eventually woke up and mistook her for an angel. They were eventually wed and happy, but the emporer, trying not to have lose ends, captured and killed his new wife, luring him out. The emporer had fifteen samurai, he guessed the ruler of Japan was friends with Xiànzōng and didnt think much of it. He took most of them down easily but fell to a stab wound in his left lung. He saw his own body and knew he was dead. He walked around and started seeing giant demons. He attacked them and killed a few, before a man in a black robe with a katana found him and hit him on the head with the back of his katana.
Many years later he had became a shinigami in Squad 3, slowly rising in the ranks. His Zanpaktou was different than most since it wasnt a katana, but a broadsword. Instead of putting it on his side he put it on his back. He ended up befriending Aizen, Shinji, and Gin, but never liked tosen He was tested on by Aizen, and was told never to tell, which he didnt care about. He was eventually the third seat in his squad but then the incident about Aizen happened and he left with him, but instead of going to huece mundo, he went to the real world with the others that were tested on by Aizen. He discovered his hollow inside and went inside his mind to deal with it. He was lucky he dealt with it that early otherwise it wouldnt have ended so easily. While his hollow had alot of Reiatsu it was dwarfed imensely by his. However he learned his mask had certian powers that others didnt.
Aizen found him and made a garganta to bring him to him, he told him he would be the first vizard/arrancar crossbreed, a being of unimaginable power, and used the hogyokyu to do it. afterwards aizen and him became a bit closer, and he and gin became great friends, probably due to their insanity. He was pronounced cero espada. He abandoned Espada later on, and tried raising a team to kill aizen, knowing he was not strong enough yet to kill him himself. He was working on his anti-illusions technique. He raised Shikyo Tenkai by himself, and the orginization was going well, he found many friends in the human world and even Soul Society, and on a few occasions he was able to visit Hueco Mundo without aizen trying to kill him.
He retained his enormous reiatsu and power through each life, giving him unbeleiveable strength, but each time he died he lost half his strength, so he was only as powerful as a captain commander, namely, Yamamoto. When Yamamoto died Kurokon took the chance to try to take over seireitei, but differently than anyone else, he did so by becoming the new captain commander.
While most Captain commanders were even more reserved than captains, Kurokon wished to get to know his comrades. Kurokon was asked to remake the Central 46, but denied. They continuiously demanded to be remade, but in their arrogance they threatened him, to which he responded by slicing their heads off. He saw just how bigoted and cruel soul society really was. The central fourty six couldve fixed half of the rukongai with the money they had in their pockets, let alone anywhere safe. Kurokon then decided to leave the cruelty of soul society, returning to his original home in hte human world. He then met Hayami Rentai, another vaizard, who he taught how to control the full hollow form, along with dellapero, who he helped clear the way to kill grimmjow.

Kurokon took the chance after aizen died to take the hogyoku and fuse with it. He has finally shown his true strength and now controls the two most powerful orginizations, Espada, and Vaizards, although this is only through others. He doesnt directly control anyone but Dellapero and Hayami, even then he doesnt CONTROL them, just guide them.

RP Sample: You already know.


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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyThu Aug 26, 2010 4:17 am

Quote :
Personality: While many beleive he is young, and foolish he is older than any known being, he counts each life for his total age, since he can remember every life he has ever had. He still retains wolf characteristics, and is very protective, he is calm, and collective, known for his insanity and cruelness. He has been known to go beserk in many situations.

If you are 1.5 billion years old, I believe your personality would be a bit more complex then that. Please lengthen it.

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Name: Death's Touch

State: Resurrecion, Passive

Description: When Kensei touches flesh, it burns and rots as if dying, causing immense pain.

Is there any way to block/counter this, besides 'don't get touched

Quote :

History: The very first thing he remembers is being a wolf like hollow, over one billion years ago, when he acheived his ability of rememberence. He was killed by another hollow, and when the hollow became a menos his personality took over. He was effectively the first Vasto lordes ever, when he became vasto his form changed into a death like look. He was killed by the first shinigami. He was then turned into a shinigami, and died again by a powerful hollow, he was eventually reincarnated as Kensei tenkai, a samurai warrior in China serving an emporer, noted for killing over ten samurai without extra help. He retained his enormous reiatsu and power through each life, giving him unbeleiveable strength, but each time he died he lost half his strength, so he was only as powerful as a captain commander, namely, Yamamoto. He kept his strength hidden, until he manipulated Aizen into making him a vaizard, a being of ultimate chances for power. He left with the other vaizards afterwards, until he eventually manipulated him again, only this time it was to make him the first perfect hybrid, it wasnt hard considering Aizen trusted him, if only a bit.

Kurokon took the chance after aizen died to take the hogyoku and fuse with it, becoming the most powerful being yet. He has finally shown his true strength and now controls the two most powerful orginizations, Espada, and Vaizards, although this is only through others. He doesnt directly control anyone but Dellapero and Hayami, even then he doesnt CONTROL them, just guide them.

This also needs to be lengthened to match your age.

~Urufu
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyThu Aug 26, 2010 6:07 am

please note this is an edit, and im still working on it, appearently the WIP didnt show up on the title... anyway the only ways to block it is indirect touch, in other words it dont affect anything but skin, blood, etc.

now for personality, he may be over 1 billion, but he started as a wolf, not very complex, the only reason he is intelligent is because he remembers all his past lives, so let me put it this way... what else can I put? random situations that have no true meaning to satisfy your length?

and as i said im working on history, i was in a hurry last night.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyThu Aug 26, 2010 6:08 am

Well, I wasn't aware it was a wip.

Oh, I'm sorry. I'm not aware he spent a billion years sitting on his ass twiddling his thumbs.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyThu Aug 26, 2010 6:13 am

oh how very polite of you
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyThu Aug 26, 2010 6:18 am

I apologize for checking the app early, the WIP wasn't put up.

However, my terms still stand. If you don't like it, feel free to take it up with an admin.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyThu Aug 26, 2010 4:22 pm

there is that satisfactory?
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyThu Aug 26, 2010 5:28 pm

No, but I'll approve it anyway.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 5:08 pm

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Actual Age: 1500000000 or 1.5 billion years

Appeared Age: 25

Ridiculous, if you're 1.5 billion years old your body is shriveled like a prune. Make the age realistic and make the appeared age realistic MEANING under 5,000 years old.l

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Relationship Status: Doing it in RP

Then link it, "Doing it in RP" means nothing. Either decribe it or put a link

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Unique Ability: His personal ability that no other being has is his memory, it is unlimited, he has retained this through all his lives, it is passive, and he has infinite capacity for memory, meaning he remembers many past lives, where no other being can, except certian hollows, but even for them its usually fuzzy, but his is perfect, as if it happened yesterday.

Noooooo not happening. Nobody anywhere can remember a past life let alone ALL of them. You can remember one past life but thats it.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Duration: Infinite, due to hybrid.

Impossible, you're not a hybrid and even if you were the duration is not infinite. How many posts can it last REALISTICALLY

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Family: shadow/dark, light/holy, poison, Death


This is where you choose ONE family not six.....

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Inari

State: Mangekyou

Description: Inari is the ability to completely shapeshift, and allows the user to determine if he can be seen by the living. This also completely masks his reiasu. This ability disables use of other techniques until he changes back. He can also become other things like animals or plants, while retaining his normal form, this cannot be disrupted and also changes the voice.

You cannot determine if you can be seen by the living simply through using mangekyou. Thats OPed. You cannot completely mask your reiatsu, thats only been done once and that was Ichigo, its a special property that belongs to HIM so YOU cannot do that, OP.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Izanami

State: Mangekyou

Description: Izanami is the ability to ressurect the dead. This ability is a huge benifet yet dangerous because you can only resurrect one person at a time and when you do, you cannot move for five minutes (three posts). However this ability disables other sharingan techniques for a day. There must be a limb or something left.

This technique checks out in my books, but how long is a day in RP. Please edit and say that it cannot be used again in that specific RP or give it a large post number.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Tsukiyomi

State: Mangekyou

Description: Tsukuyomi requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the technique traps the target in an illusion that is completely controlled by the user. When Kensei uses it, he is able to make the move seem to last for days when in fact it only lasts a few moments. This allows him to torture the target for what seems like days on end, causing mental trauma that will render them unable to fight for an extensive period of time.

A move this OPed shouldn't be approved but im letting it slide. Just say how long they are unable to fight for. 3-5 posts. And add a large cooldown.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Death's Touch

State: Resurrecion, Passive

Description: When Kensei touches flesh, it burns and rots as if dying, causing immense pain.

Scratch this, not allowed you cannot simply touch someone and have them/that body part die. Remove it

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Black Death Cero

State: any

Description: Fires a deadly black cero that when hit explodes. The explosion itself isnt as bad as the mist coming from it, this is where it gets the name Black Death Cero, the mist is posionous to anything, and it makes the person it affects not be able to use Reiatsu normally, making their control terrible, disabling mid to high level moves. By taking in small ammounts of it at a time, Kensei became immune to it.

No way hes immune to it, change that so he is affected too or remove the technique. Also add a 5 post cooldown

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Bankai Description: Complete immunity to fire and electricity, to those that dont realize the only reason fire is dangerous is because its heat, it also makes heat innefective against him. Shikai abilitys carry over to bankai, and the fire and lightning can move faster, and is stronger.

Take out the COMPLETE immunity to fire and electricity. A certain degree of heat may be ineffective but if hot enough he needs to be hurt. Thats waaaayyyyy too OPed

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
RP Sample: You already know.

No we dont know, so post the damn RP sample
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 5:10 pm

And lastly you cannot carry over titles from other sites. Im going to talk with EVERY admin about this "hybrid" thing you got going on. Bleach Serenity is NOT other sites so plot events from other sites are kept SEPARATE
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 6:16 pm

I agree completely with every single one of Sanba's statements, and apologize for allowing it earlier when I clearly should not have.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 9:08 pm

Sanba wrote:
Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Actual Age: 1500000000 or 1.5 billion years

Appeared Age: 25

Ridiculous, if you're 1.5 billion years old your body is shriveled like a prune. Make the age realistic and make the appeared age realistic MEANING under 5,000 years old.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Relationship Status: Doing it in RP

Then link it, "Doing it in RP" means nothing. Either decribe it or put a link

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Unique Ability: His personal ability that no other being has is his memory, it is unlimited, he has retained this through all his lives, it is passive, and he has infinite capacity for memory, meaning he remembers many past lives, where no other being can, except certian hollows, but even for them its usually fuzzy, but his is perfect, as if it happened yesterday.

Noooooo not happening. Nobody anywhere can remember a past life let alone ALL of them. You can remember one past life but thats it.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Duration: Infinite, due to hybrid.

Impossible, you're not a hybrid and even if you were the duration is not infinite. How many posts can it last REALISTICALLY

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Family: shadow/dark, light/holy, poison, Death


This is where you choose ONE family not six.....

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Inari

State: Mangekyou

Description: Inari is the ability to completely shapeshift, and allows the user to determine if he can be seen by the living. This also completely masks his reiasu. This ability disables use of other techniques until he changes back. He can also become other things like animals or plants, while retaining his normal form, this cannot be disrupted and also changes the voice.

You cannot determine if you can be seen by the living simply through using mangekyou. Thats OPed. You cannot completely mask your reiatsu, thats only been done once and that was Ichigo, its a special property that belongs to HIM so YOU cannot do that, OP.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Izanami

State: Mangekyou

Description: Izanami is the ability to ressurect the dead. This ability is a huge benifet yet dangerous because you can only resurrect one person at a time and when you do, you cannot move for five minutes (three posts). However this ability disables other sharingan techniques for a day. There must be a limb or something left.

This technique checks out in my books, but how long is a day in RP. Please edit and say that it cannot be used again in that specific RP or give it a large post number.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Tsukiyomi

State: Mangekyou

Description: Tsukuyomi requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the technique traps the target in an illusion that is completely controlled by the user. When Kensei uses it, he is able to make the move seem to last for days when in fact it only lasts a few moments. This allows him to torture the target for what seems like days on end, causing mental trauma that will render them unable to fight for an extensive period of time.

A move this OPed shouldn't be approved but im letting it slide. Just say how long they are unable to fight for. 3-5 posts. And add a large cooldown.

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Death's Touch

State: Resurrecion, Passive

Description: When Kensei touches flesh, it burns and rots as if dying, causing immense pain.

Scratch this, not allowed you cannot simply touch someone and have them/that body part die. Remove it

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Name: Black Death Cero

State: any

Description: Fires a deadly black cero that when hit explodes. The explosion itself isnt as bad as the mist coming from it, this is where it gets the name Black Death Cero, the mist is posionous to anything, and it makes the person it affects not be able to use Reiatsu normally, making their control terrible, disabling mid to high level moves. By taking in small ammounts of it at a time, Kensei became immune to it.

No way hes immune to it, change that so he is affected too or remove the technique. Also add a 5 post cooldown

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
Bankai Description: Complete immunity to fire and electricity, to those that dont realize the only reason fire is dangerous is because its heat, it also makes heat innefective against him. Shikai abilitys carry over to bankai, and the fire and lightning can move faster, and is stronger.

Take out the COMPLETE immunity to fire and electricity. A certain degree of heat may be ineffective but if hot enough he needs to be hurt. Thats waaaayyyyy too OPed

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:
RP Sample: You already know.

No we dont know, so post the damn RP sample

for age, i am counting past lives he has remembered, since his very. first. one.

doing it in rp, means if i meet someone in rp i will choose, in other words, dont come to me, ill come to you ._. you shouldnt even have wasted your time with something so trivial

now about the unique ability, there is absolutely no reason this shouldnt be allowed, there is NO rule stating such a thing nor is it op or godmod, all hollow have a singular ability that no other race has, the only difference in his is it continuosly carried over, its not even really a fighting ability =/

now listen here, I AM a hybrid, I asked sarah when i first joined this site, she didnt care, and even if she did, now i AM due to hogyoku, i can deal with removing infinite, but do not argue with me that I AM a hybrid, sarah herself didnt mind when i joined this, and no one has complained about it, only questioned.

what does the family even MATTER?! seriously? your posting about nonimportant things in my app, and if it helps ease your mind I meant to remove all but death

revealing myself to the living, well i dont really need it considering we dont have anyone who cant see shinigami etc.

and the cool down for it is five pages, yes that many, mostly due to i rarely rp in topics that long...

the tsukiyomi i meant to edit, into a certian way i will do that in a while, sorry, and it can only be used once a topic, like any other sharingan tech, cept inari

thank you for bringing the deaths touch to my attention, i forgot to edit it, as i did ALOT of shit... damn my memory x.x

the reason hes immune to it is the same reason Yamamoto's fire didnt affect himself, its HIS reiatsu, so it definitely wouldnt effect him, besides when you see a black mist moving towards you are you just going to stand there like a retard, this i dont see why i should edit... and 5 post cool down... FOR A CERO?!... im really getting more annoyed the more i read now arent I e.e considering people can use gran rey cero in the same time, and the only thing it disables would be high level cero, like gran rey or higher, and kido above 50, its not oped =/

....hold it.... your allowing me to have a one LOOK kill but not complete immunity to two elements..... wow.... anywho would complete fire be fine then? and a lightning bolt would be like getting stabbed, but not that deadly to his cells?

and you do know how i rp, youve seen me =/
here its from the espada meeting.
Kurokon sighed "well gin I have nothing better to do than to see how this will go, Im probably going to bet on Seireitei, ya here? they have a new captain commander... at least if they attack them with only this... no tactics or anything..."

Kurokon was getting tired of teh bickering, not hard considering their foolishness. "enough... infighting will only allow for all of you to be wiped out by seireitei... and Amata do calm down, remember how bad the original espada were...." Kurokon sighed, remembering them himself. They were arrogant, not even worthy of the power they had, only starrk and tia deserved their rank. While starrk was lazy, he was very genuis, probably the only espada who knew Aizen would betray them.

"you are right though Amata... but he doesnt look like a child molester... more like a molester of child molesters..." He said plainly, it was a riddle really, few would understand it, even fewer would care.


now good day...... ive always wanted to say that....
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 10:19 pm

Kurokon Shikyo wrote:

for age, i am counting past lives he has remembered, since his very. first. one.

doing it in rp, means if i meet someone in rp i will choose, in other words, dont come to me, ill come to you ._. you shouldnt even have wasted your time with something so trivial

now about the unique ability, there is absolutely no reason this shouldnt be allowed, there is NO rule stating such a thing nor is it op or godmod, all hollow have a singular ability that no other race has, the only difference in his is it continuosly carried over, its not even really a fighting ability =/

now listen here, I AM a hybrid, I asked sarah when i first joined this site, she didnt care, and even if she did, now i AM due to hogyoku, i can deal with removing infinite, but do not argue with me that I AM a hybrid, sarah herself didnt mind when i joined this, and no one has complained about it, only questioned.

what does the family even MATTER?! seriously? your posting about nonimportant things in my app, and if it helps ease your mind I meant to remove all but death

revealing myself to the living, well i dont really need it considering we dont have anyone who cant see shinigami etc.

and the cool down for it is five pages, yes that many, mostly due to i rarely rp in topics that long...

the tsukiyomi i meant to edit, into a certian way i will do that in a while, sorry, and it can only be used once a topic, like any other sharingan tech, cept inari

thank you for bringing the deaths touch to my attention, i forgot to edit it, as i did ALOT of shit... damn my memory x.x

the reason hes immune to it is the same reason Yamamoto's fire didnt affect himself, its HIS reiatsu, so it definitely wouldnt effect him, besides when you see a black mist moving towards you are you just going to stand there like a retard, this i dont see why i should edit... and 5 post cool down... FOR A CERO?!... im really getting more annoyed the more i read now arent I e.e considering people can use gran rey cero in the same time, and the only thing it disables would be high level cero, like gran rey or higher, and kido above 50, its not oped =/

....hold it.... your allowing me to have a one LOOK kill but not complete immunity to two elements..... wow.... anywho would complete fire be fine then? and a lightning bolt would be like getting stabbed, but not that deadly to his cells?

and you do know how i rp, youve seen me =/
here its from the espada meeting.
Kurokon sighed "well gin I have nothing better to do than to see how this will go, Im probably going to bet on Seireitei, ya here? they have a new captain commander... at least if they attack them with only this... no tactics or anything..."

Kurokon was getting tired of teh bickering, not hard considering their foolishness. "enough... infighting will only allow for all of you to be wiped out by seireitei... and Amata do calm down, remember how bad the original espada were...." Kurokon sighed, remembering them himself. They were arrogant, not even worthy of the power they had, only starrk and tia deserved their rank. While starrk was lazy, he was very genuis, probably the only espada who knew Aizen would betray them.

"you are right though Amata... but he doesnt look like a child molester... more like a molester of child molesters..." He said plainly, it was a riddle really, few would understand it, even fewer would care.


now good day...... ive always wanted to say that....

Either way you arent 1.5 billion years old. Post the age of your current age/the last life you have

I addressed the relationship because you only need to put SINGLE

Doesnt need to be a fighting ability to be unreasonably strong. The unique ability isnt something to make your character represent a god. You have given no reason as to why he should be able to remember it, its an unreasonable trait so no it is not approved. Final decision, if another admin/mod thinks differently then they can speak out.

Dont say "now listen here" like im trash. You're hybrid power is BS and like I told you it is being reviewed. Having something like that from another site is total bull. Sarah may have accepted it at the beginning but now it is being looked at by everyone, and im sure that it will be canceled out. If you would like to try and work for or achieve hybrid in a topic on THIS site then you are entitled to do so.

Everything in your app matters, including the family. So when you post something stupid, like you did, and I point it out that is reason enough. Dont complain just fix it

Your cero is OPed. If you're going to have a black mist coming out the cooldown will be longer than a gran rey. If you're immune to the mist because it's your reiatsu then SAY that in your app dont say its because you have been inhaling it for billions of years, which you havent. If you die over and over again you wouldnt have the same tolerances.

No im allowing you to keep the "looking" move because the opponent can easily avoid it by not making eye contact. You cant be completely immune at all, for either one. YOu can choose to tolerate a higher level and that will be up for discussion but no you cannot have complete immunity to either.

FINALLY.....put up an RP sample. So that we can all see how you RP with your character, with fighting and with just talking. If you want a high rank like a hybrid then you must prove that you deserve it, not say that the head admin doesnt care. NOT good enough. Post a real RP sample, or post a link with extensive use of your character in an RP
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Kurokon Shikyo

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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 10:32 pm

you ever wonder why sarah let me have my hybrid? simple, It was HER site, she knows i earned it, simple as that, hell we wouldnt have moved if it wasnt for an idiot hacker, and i said "now listen here" because you keep bringing it up like an asshole

my cero is definitely NOT oped, but for this small thing i will cave in, but thats it, over period, DONE.

and immunity is NOT oped, now being able to make unbreakable illusions that cannot be escaped, or unescapable moves, THATS oped, a simple cero to the face or certian type of fire, like special cold fire or some shit, its not as simple as you think...

as for rp sample i PUT one up

now if you dont mind id prefer to have someone reasonable look at my app -_-
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptyFri Aug 27, 2010 11:06 pm

To be quite honest i back him fully being a moderator myself and if it was me i would have been a lot more harsh on you Kurokon so please get off your high horse and try rping as a fair balanced character so that you can have the ability to not need a person to have to make it about more than fun to get serious and kill you.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 2:30 am

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Duration: (How long your mask can stay out, and how long until you can use it again. 10 posts is the maximum.)
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Duration: 20

I will not allow you to have 10 posts duration over the maximum regardless of whether you're a hybrid or not.

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Cero:
Power Augmentation:
Mask Protection:
Reiryoku Enhancement:
Telekinesis:
High-Speed Regeneration

Just for clarification, as you don't actually say anywhere in your app, but do you have all of these abilities? If so please say that you have them, not just saying things like:
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High-Speed Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs. Only Menos-class Hollows have demonstrated this ability. Ulquiorra states that most Arrancar gave up Regeneration for far greater strength.
Because this doesn't actually tell us anything except what it is.

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Name: Sharingan

I want you to rewrite this in what your character can do - it says that the more they train the more tomoe they get, but how many does your character have? Also, I want you to put restrictions on this technique - how many times can you use it in a fight? How long, post-wise, can you use it for - and don't say unlimited because I won't allow that. What types of people and power levels can you influence with this ability, and does the effect decrease as the person becomes more powerful? Is your character powerful enough to use all aspects of the sharingan? Also, when you say 'it grants the user the ability to memorize any technique that he or she witnesses' how many abilities can you memorize, and for how long can you memorize them for?

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Name: Inari

State: Mangekyou

Description: Inari is the ability to completely shapeshift. This ability disables use of other techniques until he changes back. He can also become other things like animals or plants, while retaining his normal form, this cannot be disrupted and also changes the voice.

How long does it take to set up this technique, or does he shapeshift instantly? How long can he hold his shape shifted form, and what is its cooldown? Does it take longer to shapeshift into more complex things then it would for something simpler, like a human for more complex and a rock for simpler? Would he use this in a fight as it doesn't allow him use of other techniques?

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Name: Izanami

State: Mangekyou

Description: Izanami is the ability to ressurect the dead. This ability is a huge benifet yet dangerous because you can only resurrect one person at a time and when you do, you cannot move for five minutes (three posts). However this ability disables other sharingan techniques for a day. There must be a limb or something left. Only done once per topic

I will not allow this technique so please remove it - it's too OPed to be able to bring people back from the dead, even if you do have a cooldown - and not a very good cooldown, I think.

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Name: Raiden

State: Mangekyou

Description: Raiden is the ability to make and control a red lightning that can blind and attack enemies, without sound. Kensei can hold this for some time due to his natural lightning reiatsu. This technique can also be used to make weapons and shields, letting kensei fight in his bankai with two swords or one sword and one shield.

How much preparation does it take to make the red lightening? Also, what is its cooldown and how long does it blind the enemy for? Is there anyway to block this attack or not be affected by it? How long does the lightening stay out for? With making weapons and shields how many can he make per topic? Also, what is its cooldown if he makes one/two weapons? How long does it take to make the swords and/or shield?

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Name: Tsukiyomi

State: Mangekyou

Description: Tsukiyomi requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the technique traps the target in the user's mind, where they control everything that happens. When Kensei uses it, he is able to make the move seem to last for days when in fact it only lasts a few moments. This allows him to torture the target for what seems like days on end, causing mental trauma that will render them unable to fight for an extensive period of time. This can also be used to travel into others mind, but only those willing. This bypasses immunity to illusions. This lasts for anywhere from one post to one page, depending on Kurokon's choice, this can only be used once per topic.

Is there anyway to escape from this attack once you become trapped in it? How many failed attempts is he allowed to have to try and trap a user's mind? One page is 15 posts - I want you to lower the amount of posts this can last for. When they can't fight is your character still allowed to physically attack them?

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Name: Death's Touch

State: Resurrecion, Passive

Description: When Kensei touches flesh, it gives off the pain as if it was burning and decaying slowly, unfortunately Kurokon must keep his hand where it is or it immidiatly stops.

Does this have any physical side effects?

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Released Zanpakuto Description: Completely control fire and lightning, with resistances to both, enough to make a normal fire at 300 degrees seem normal, and enough to make normal electrocution only painful but not damaging.

300 degrees Fahrenheit or Celsius? I want you to rewrite this paragraph and make it more coherent, because at the moment it isn't easily understood - maybe split it into more than one sentence, one sentence for what the fire can do, and one for what the lightning can do. Also, how many times can he do those two techniques in a fight?

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Bankai Description: Complete immunity to fire and electricity, to those that dont realize the only reason fire is dangerous is because its heat, it also makes heat innefective against him. Shikai abilitys carry over to bankai, and the fire and lightning can move faster, and is stronger.

Please rewrite this paragraoh and make it more coherent, and you can leave out the 'to those who don't realize the only reason fire is dangerous is because it's hot' as it is not needed. You say the shikai abilities move over into bankai and that the fire and lightening can move faster and stronger, but in your shikai you didn't state any abilities other than you can make hot fire seem normal, and make electruction painful but not damaging. If you have any other attacks please list them otherwise remove the part about fire and lightning moving quicker and stronger.

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Kurokon took the chance after aizen died to take the hogyoku and fuse with it, becoming the most powerful being yet.

Remove the part about becoming the most powerful being yet as he isn't, not now with the introduction of the demons.

When making the necessary modifications, please don't quote me and just do the changes and post saying you're done when you finish them.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 6:32 am

One other thing about your history.

How the FUCK did you die as a hollow and become a shinigami, and then repeat that process?

Since when the hell did that work?
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 6:43 am

But how does he go from shinigami to hollow then?
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 6:46 am

Yeah, I saw that and deleted my last post as it didn't apply anymore ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 6:47 am

So you did xD

Alright then.

And Kurokon...

I believe in the rules it states that all should listen and respect the admins and mods.

Calling each one of us unreasonable is NOT respectful.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 7:44 pm

would it be acceptable for me to just give hogyoku to this character? and delete this one?
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 7:46 pm

Since this character was unnapproved, he does not have the hogyoku.

Besides, the leader of the espada should have it, not some random hybrid punk.

So, No. because. No.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 7:51 pm

I TOOK it in rp, BEFORE I was unapproved, and dont just say no because no, supply an actual REASON, I actually did it in RP, you should at least be nice enough to actually let me have it for bakura, its unfair for me to have stolen it and then just lose everything i worked for =/
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 7:52 pm

Alright, how about this then.

The simple fact of the matter is, What reason should your human have the hogyoku. Fine, you can give it to him.

Dell's just gonna go wtfpwn him and take it back.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai)   Kurokon Shikyo (update as Kensei Tenkai) EmptySat Aug 28, 2010 7:53 pm

what reason? Im the one who earned it.
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