Kenshiro's Kido

Name: Hundred Golden Birds' Flight [Hyarukuden]
Number: Unnumbered [Between 57 and 60]
Category: Hadou
Incantation: "Blazing Heat, Divide into hundreds, Burn and incinerate all their pride !!"
Effect: The caster says the incantation while a ball of spiritual energy forms infront of him. And at will, it will fire hundreds of smaller blasts. Each blasts explodes upon contact, burning anything it hits. The blasts could travel up to 50m, having devastating power upon direct hit. Cooldown: 4 posts

Name: Violet Lightning Spear [Shidenri]
Number: 65
Category: Hadou
Incantation: "Gather your volts.. compress your power.. pierce through evil !!"
Effect: A very powerful version of the Hadou #4 White Lightning. The user gathers electricity of spiritual energy as he says the incantation then fires into the target. The blast is so concentrated and sharp that it would pierce even through an Espada's Hierro but the damage it does is just similar to the derived Kido. After piercing through a target, the caster may swung the concentrated blast like a sword to cut its victim but becomes weaker. The first shot of the Kido is very fast that requires a speed of Shunpo to dodge. The next three shots would be as fast as Byakurai. The caster may use this Kido 4 times for two posts before the 3 posts cooldown.

Name: Chaos Shell [Kaosheru]
Number: Unnumbered [Small: 20-25, Medium: 35-40, Strong: 75-80]
Category: Bakudo
Incantation: "Defend the innocent.."
Effect: A shield of hardened spiritual energy appears near the caster where an attack is aimed after the incantation is spoken. The size and power of the Kido depends on the attack it defends. The kido is divided into three types: the small which blocks attack below Hadou #20, sealed swords, Arrancar's regular bala and anything weak. Second is the Intermediate which blocks Cero, non-melee type released weapons and Kido below 35. And lastly the Strong which blocks kido up to 78, and etc.
Small -- 4 usage before 2 posts cooldown [doesn't need incantation]
Intermediate -- 2 usage before 4 posts cooldown
Strong -- 1 usage before 4 posts cooldown
Note: The shield lasts up to 2 posts or can be broken if the attack is higher than the defensive power of the Kido.

Im not a mod, but im pretty sure if i dont say this, someone else will.

For your first kido, there needs to be a number. You can't have a kido like that that is un-numbered but can incenerate anything that tries to withstand it. We need to know how much energy it can take, if Enkosen can block it, or if Danku can withstand it. Duration? Cooldown?

Second kido, for being an enhanced version of Hado 4, It's number is much too high. Lower the number, a 71 kido, pretty much exactly like Byakurai ... it's too cheap. If its going to be similar, the power wont be THAT different... Anyway, using it FOUR times within 2 posts for a kido that WOULD be 71 strength is SIMPLY too much. Duration? Cooldown?

Third kido, the strength won't depend on the attack, it needs a DEFINED strength for the kido. For the kido's strength, the incantation is too small. We need a size. How long does it last?

wow.. nice try.. ^_^

thanks for the effort .. ^_^ but needs a mod..

I know, im usually allowed to say things when it comes to things like this. Sometimes i'm allowed to go over an application and have things done, but i suggest you listen, because i bet'cha they're gonna say i was right :/

With the kido that are unnumbered, you are allowed to have them unnumbered, but can you please say what their equivalent power level is - eg, the kido is as strong as a level 5, something like that

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The caster forms a ball of spiritual energy infront of him. And at will, it will fire hundreds of smaller blasts. Each blasts explodes upon contact, burning and incinerating anything who tries to withstand.

Does this take any time to prepare, or is it made instantly? When you say it incinerates anything who tries to withstand it, are you saying that it will incinerate an opponent? How many times can he use this in a fight, and what is its cooldown?

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A very powerful version of the Hadou #4 White Lightning. The user gathers electricity of spiritual energy then fires into the target. The blast is so concentrated and sharp that it would pierce even through an Espada's Hierro but the damage it does is just similar to the derived Kido. After piercing through a target, the caster may swung the concentrated blast like a sword to cut its victim. The caster may use this Kido 4 times for two posts.

I would like you lower the number of your kido, just for the fact that you're a third seat - you can increase its strength through practice. How much time does it take to prepare this attack? How accurate is the electricity fired at an opponent? When it strikes through an espadas hierro, or when it hits anything, does the strenght of the attack decrease as it becomes a sword? Is that four times in each of the two posts, or four times all up over two posts? Also, this needs a cooldown.

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A shield of hardened spiritual energy appears on the caster's body part where an attack is aimed. The size and power of the Kido depends on the attack it defends.

How much preparation time does this technique have? Also, what is its cooldown? How hard is the spiritual energy on the users body - how easy is it to break? Also, how long does it stay in place? Can you please list how strong the kido will be for the various parts of the body. Also, the range 10-80 is a bit big, so if you could make the range a bit smaller.

at last.. edited..

Please answer all the questions

For Hundred Golden Birds' Flight and Chaos Shell, I'd like for you to say what number they would have if they were numbered, just so that we can get a sense of how powerful they are.

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The caster forms a ball of spiritual energy infront of him. And at will, it will fire hundreds of smaller blasts. Each blasts explodes upon contact, burning and incinerating anything who tries to withstand. Cooldown: 4 posts

How long does it take to form the ball of spiritual energy? How far can he fire the smaller blasts - how far do they travel? When you say it incinerates anything who tries to withstand it, are you saying that it will incinerate an opponent?

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A very powerful version of the Hadou #4 White Lightning. The user gathers electricity of spiritual energy then fires into the target. The blast is so concentrated and sharp that it would pierce even through an Espada's Hierro but the damage it does is just similar to the derived Kido. After piercing through a target, the caster may swung the concentrated blast like a sword to cut its victim but becomes weaker. The caster may use this Kido 4 times for two posts before the 4 posts cooldown.

How much time does it take to prepare this attack? How accurate is the electricity fired at an opponent - how fast does it move? How easy is it to dodge or block this kido?

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A shield of hardened spiritual energy appears on the caster's body part where an attack is aimed. The size and power of the Kido depends on the attack it defends. The kido is divided into three types: the small which blocks attack below Hadou #20, sealed swords, Arrancar's regular bala and anything weak. Second is the Intermediate which blocks Cero, non-melee type released weapons and Kido below 35. And lastly the Strong which blocks kido up to 78, Gran Rey Cero and etc.
Small -- 4 usage before 2 posts cooldown [doesn't need incantation]
Intermediate -- 2 usage before 2 posts cooldown
Strong -- 1 usage before two posts cooldown

In the strong part of the ability, please remove that it is capable of blocking Gran Rey Cero, as this would be too strong to be blocked by a third seat. Also, when you say it can block non-melee type released weapons, are you saying it can block every single attack used by the weapon? Can he block attacks by people stronger than him? How much preparation time does this technique have? How hard is the spiritual energy on the users body - how easy is it to break? Also, please increase the post cooldowns of both the intermediate and strong parts of this attack.

Done ^_^

bump ?

Sorry for not answering sooner ^^

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Name: Hundred Golden Birds' Flight [Hyarukuden]
Number: Unnumbered [Between 35 and 60]

This range is too large - please make it smaller, with maybe only a five level difference if you need to do a range.

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Effect: The caster says the incantation while a ball of spiritual energy forms infront of him. And at will, it will fire hundreds of smaller blasts. Each blasts explodes upon contact, burning anything it hits. Cooldown: 4 posts

How far can he fire the smaller blasts - how far do they travel?

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Effect: A very powerful version of the Hadou #4 White Lightning. The user gathers electricity of spiritual energy then fires into the target. The blast is so concentrated and sharp that it would pierce even through an Espada's Hierro but the damage it does is just similar to the derived Kido. After piercing through a target, the caster may swung the concentrated blast like a sword to cut its victim but becomes weaker. The caster may use this Kido 4 times for two posts before the 3 posts cooldown.

How much time does it take to prepare this attack? How accurate is the electricity fired at an opponent - how fast does it move? How easy is it to dodge or block this kido?

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Effect: A shield of hardened spiritual energy appears near the caster where an attack is aimed. The size and power of the Kido depends on the attack it defends. The kido is divided into three types: the small which blocks attack below Hadou #20, sealed swords, Arrancar's regular bala and anything weak. Second is the Intermediate which blocks Cero, non-melee type released weapons and Kido below 35. And lastly the Strong which blocks kido up to 78, and etc.

When you say it can block non-melee type released weapons, are you saying it can block every single attack used by the weapon? Can he block attacks by people stronger than him? How much preparation time does this technique have? How hard is the spiritual energy on the users body - how easy is it to break?

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Name: Chaos Shell [Kaosheru]
Number: Unnumbered

Can you do the same thing with this kido as you did with the other one by putting an eqivalent kido value or range, so that we know roughly how powerful it is.

BUMP !!!!

Approved ^^