In my opinion, work on your grammar.
To get started with, You're asking to become a Level 4 Quincy, your app is a bit small. I'd say you'd be either a 2 or a 3 leveled quincy.
Two, Yoni: No sending hollows to Soul Society, it's completely against the Quincy Race. Also, all of your homing arrows, they're not OPed, why do you have such a strict limit to how much they can be used per topic? C'mon, loosen them chains a bit more!
Try giving an appearance though, it'll help with your ranking as a quincy...
Goni: depending on your powerlevel, not all arrows will go through someone. Likewise, just because you make your arrow energy go to your fist, doesnt mean it will go through someone. It sure has the potential, but it depends on your enemy. Edit that please.
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Thats all i really see.