Kuraiyama Akishiya

[center]Basic Information

Name: Kuraiyama Akishiya (kurai for short)

Age:looks 15 but is actually 449

Gender: female

Grade: N/A

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Rank: special human

Personality: Kurai is a quiet,and mysterious character that rarely talks to anybody and sees herself as a monster as a result she tends to avoid from getting into social activities. In battle she is a powerful fighter that is calm,and cunning and will occasionally give her opponent a smirk or a teasing look in her eye.and when someone close to her is harmed she will stop at nothing to kill the enemy. When angered she is someone to be feared. but when someone gets to know her she is friendly,kind,and open hearted individual that loves to tease both genders and has a slight perverted side.normally she is seen taking walks at night or trining deep in the forest during her free time.

Sexuality: bisexual

Relationship Status: single and looking

Human Special Ability Information

Name: Weilder of the silver crosses

Description: Kurai is able to summon two sliver crosses that are both 5 feet long. they have sharp blades at the end of each cross that can cut through anything and at a certain side,the crosses attach themselves to Kurais skin. preveting anyone from knocking them out of her hands. the crosses posses a special ability.they also grant her physical strengths that are beyond a normal human being.

Ability: if the crosses blade comes in contact with the skin. it has he same effect as a sword does except it burns through the flesh and boils the blood of the area that she cut or stabbed,causing intense pain that can cause painful torture the area completely.if she causes a fatal blow such as a stab to the heart or a cut through the neck. the person's body will completely melt into a puddle of their own blood.with hollows,one cut by her blade and they are purified and their souls are sent to the soul society.if she cuts a hard object such as earth,metal,wood,ice,reiatsu controlled objects.they will melt. (she cannot melt a zanpackuto blade though.)
Her weakness is that she is a close ranged fighter and cannot attack from far distances.meaning that she must take a risk everytime and move close to the enemy.


Techniques Infomation

Name: Hand to Hand combat

Description:[b] kurai has three blackbelts in three different styles of karate, she learned kick boxing,street fighting. And due to her time in the military she's advanced in swordsman ship and knows how to use different weapons such as guns,gernades,and daggers.

[b]Name: Strength

Description:Kurai is strong enough to kill a menos grande with one swing of her cross.Due to two centries of nothing but training and fighting. Kurai started to become strong enough to take down enemies bigger than herself. That and the help of her weapons ability to burn the flesh and boil the blood,melting the organs and bones while Melting the enemy in the proccess. Note: the weaker her oppoenent is the stronger the effect of her poison.

Name: speed

Description:she is fast enough to have her own technique that is similar to a shunpo.the difference is that instead of disappearing and reappearing at a certain location, Kurai can be seen moving swiftly. she accomplishes this by concentrating her spiritual energy through her body. Causing her body to move 50 times faster than a regular human. She discovered this technique by praticing on reining in her spiritual energy while doing laps around a forest. Amazed by the ability she was capable of, she trained it for years until she could completely control the technique.

Name: High spiritual pressure

Description: she has high level spiritual energy for a human.

History and RP Sample

History: Kurai was the youngest out of four brothers that where born 200 years ago in a family of Soldiers. Her mother passed away during delivery.Since her mother was a soldier her father decided to make kurai just like her mother.when she was only six years of age Her father trained her in the arts of combat, assassination,and weapon use .Day and night she trained hard and even sparred with her older brothers who each trained her in different styles of combat and techniques,Because of her years of training she was able to defeat them with ease. her social life was difficult because Even then Kurai was't feminine. instead of wearing cotton dresses like most girls would. Kurai would dress in a white button up shirt with the sleeves rolled up to her elbows,black pants,and black leather combat boots with a set of knives strapped to her belt and a loaded gun as a gift from her father.because of this,the women in her village always thought of her as strange and never spoke with her.


At the age of fourteen,Kurai was put into the army and fought in many wars and always was able to return home alive with a few battle scars.when she was 17 she was pulled out of battle and was put into a church by the last request of her parents after they died. becoming the pastor's pupil. one day,a hollow attacked and killed off the nuns and the pastor.angered Kurai suddenly watched as two silver cross like blades appeared in her hands. reflexivly she slashed out and killed the hollow. surprised at her new power she fainted from using so much energy.

Kurai awoke feeling strong and refreshed. yet she found her mentor dead.Tears running down her face. she buried the pastor and went on with her life. she then realized a few changes about herself over the years.she was slightly taller,her figure strong and beautiful,and the fact that she wasn't aging since that night. She trained herself for many years until she mastered her unique power. Kurai wandered the world of the living. only fighting when she believed it was right. searching for company in the world and escaping the lonely life she lead

RP Sample: see ichisake mizuki

looks good to me
Approved until proven otherwise

Unapproved

Remove the entire description for your ability, and re-write it, there is nothing in the description that i am gonna allow a special human to have.

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Name: Hand to Hand combat

Description: Kurai is skilled in the arts of physical combat and has quick reflexes.

how quick? How skilled?

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Name: Strength

Description:Kurai is strong enough to kill 5 menos with one swing of her cross blade.and can take serious damage such as broken or lost limbs,while still standing up.

Remove the part with broken/lost limbs and lower the amount of menos`s she can kill to 5 swings per menos

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Name: High spiritual pressure

Description: as a superhuman she is much powerful than the average human and her spiritual energy is high enough to withstand a captain level race without feeling uneasy or paralyzed.

Remove the part with being powerful, the only diffrence in special human and normal human is the spirtual power. Also, remove the part with captain level race, no special human has the ability to not feel uneasy or get tired when a captain-rank unleashes their reitsu.

Kurai wrote:

Ability: if the crosses blade comes in contact with the skin. it has he same effect as a sword does except it burns through the flesh and boils the blood of the area that she cut or stabbed,causing intense pain that can paralyze the area completely.if she causes a fatal blow such as a stab to the heart or a cut through the neck. the person's body will completely melt into a puddle of their own blood.with hollows,one cut by her blade and they are purified and their souls are sent to the soul society.if she cuts a hard object such as earth,metal,wood,ice,ect they will melt. (she cannot melt a zanpackuto blade though.)the blades are strong enough to block a gran ray cero wih ease

Well first, once your sword touches someone's skin they will burn through someone's flesh. Thats pretty imba. How can you melt someone, humans do not dissolve that easily... The area? So when you cut a person they get paralysed? Your sword can not cut through a Gran ray Cero, thats just really wrong. A gran ray is one of the strongest cero, you shouldn't be able to block it without ease.

she can't melt someone by cutting them just like that first off and second it's not that oped as you think she actually has to make physical contact with her opponent for that to happen. and that's the hard part. And it's not wrong to be able to block a gran ray cero when most people on this site can easily dodge or deflect it.

Here let me explain: kurai's weapons are pretty much poison based. And what I'm saying is if she makes a fatal wound to her opponent. The poison runs through the entire body,boiling the blood,and breaking down the persons organs and bones. In result melting the person into a pudddle of their own blood.Forgive me for saying paralyzation because It's not really paralyzation to the area it's actually torture.

And how she can break down solid objects? Simple the poison breaks down the solid objects from the inside and causes it to melt on the outside. How she can deflect a gran ray? The poison breaks down the spiritual particles that make up the attack. Causing the blast to take no effect.

Kurai, do not try to exsplain this to us.

Edit what i said

Why can't I?

and I DID edit.

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Name: Strength

Description:Kurai is strong enough to kill 2 menos grande with one swing of her cross.

I think that, for a special human, that's a bit much. Someone can't just be automatically strong enough to do that. Chad was strong, but not that strong, and even then he had his arm. Please tell how she got to be so strong. And I don't think anyone can be strong enough to kill 2 menos grande with one swing.

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Name: speed

Description:she is fast enough to have her own technique that is similar to a shunpo.

Please describe the technique. How did she get so fast? What are the differences between her tech and shunpo?

Fixed it

I think it looks okay. Approved.

Never mind, I'm going to have someone else check this since I'm not best at power things. Sorry.

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Age:looks 17 (is actually 259)

the fact that she wasn't aging since that night

Please explain why she hasn't aged as it doesn't seem to be a side-effect of her ability.

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Ability: if the crosses blade comes in contact with the skin. it has he same effect as a sword does except it burns through the flesh and boils the blood of the area that she cut or stabbed,causing intense pain that can cause painful torture the area completely.if she causes a fatal blow such as a stab to the heart or a cut through the neck. the person's body will completely melt into a puddle of their own blood.with hollows,one cut by her blade and they are purified and their souls are sent to the soul society.if she cuts a hard object such as earth,metal,wood,ice,reiatsu controlled objects.they will melt. (she cannot melt a zanpackuto blade though.)
Her weakness is that she is a close ranged fighter and cannot attack from far distances.meaning that she must take a risk everytime and move close to the enemy.

First, what do you mean by 'reiatsu controlled objects' in the description of your attack? I want you to reword the line 'if she cuts through a hard object such as earth, metal, wood, ice, reiatsu controlled objects they will melt' because this make its sound as though they will instantly melt. Also, I want better limitations and weaknesses than this because almost every person on this site fights in close combat.