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PostSubject: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySat Jul 24, 2010 3:31 pm

Basic Information

Name: Ichisake Mizuki.. ichi for short ^^

Actual Age: 678

Appeared Age: 15

Gender: r female

Division: none

Rank: ex captain of squad 2

Looks:
Spoiler:

Personality: Ichisake is a friendly tomb-boy that liked to play with her four brothers when she was alive. she loves to do all the crap guys do sometimes. she loves to draw anime and sometimes real people for the fun of it. When pissed shes a hothead and starts attacking without a second thought sometimes when this happens out of pure chance she wins her battles (but the other times...well...lets just say that she has some pretty nasty scars on her arms to prove it) but when focused she can be pretty good fighter. but,She never lets her accomplishments get to her head,(cause proffesionals might wanna kick her ass for bragging.) her favorite thing to do is to destroy hallows and to fight and learn from others like combat skills. she will happily help any good shinagami that needs help except for evil Arrancar the only help they get from her will be to put them out of there misery or die trying

Sexuality: Bisexual but prefers guys

Relationship Status: Single


Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Gengetsu (crescent moon) *jen-get-su*

Zanpakuto Looks: (see appearance)

Released Zanpakuto Description: Ichisake has the ability to absorb the spiritual energy that surrounds her, (this is how much she is capable of absorbing at a time) until her entire blade is glowing dark blue. then she releases the energy into one gran ray cero like blast.

duration/cooldown: it takes 1 post at a time to be able to recharge her blade to attack again.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Strike Gengetsu

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
Spoiler:

the blade is just as big as ichigos.



Bankai Information
(This applies to captains, and advanced lieutenants only.)

Do you want your character to have bankai: yes

Bankai Description:

*it has the same abilities with shikai,but her blasts of energy are twice as powerful and faster than her shikai attack.and her blade breaks down the reiatsu in attacks like ceros, baalas, and other reiatsu made attacks and it is absorbed into her blade, it is used to also charge her blade.Ichisake she cant absorb elemental based attacks, this is her weakness.

*Enhanced strength: Ichisake becomes strong enough to be able to take out two menos grande with one swing of her blade.

*enhanced speed: Ichisake is able to keep up with espada's beneath the number 5's sonido

*Moon shield: Ichisake's blast hardens and it expands into a 10 foot wide shield in the form of the full moon. its powerful enough to block a cero and it cannot be moved. cooldown(at least 4 posts), and a duration( 3 posts)


*kyuukyoku getsuei sutoraiku (ultimate moon strike): saying the name of her ultimate attack, All of the spiritual pressure within 10 feet within her radius is absorbed into her blade and blasts the enemy . The impact of her attack is like getting struck by 2 gran ray ceros.


Bankai Looks: she keeps her sword (which is the same as shikai)


History and RP Sample
History: Ichisake izumi was a strange but friendly girl who lived with her older sisters in Tokyo Japan.she was teased at school because of her strange eye color, and of her strange personality, but she ignored them and went on with her life until one fateful day, a gang of girls came around a corner while she was walking home from school, they grabbed her and checked her for money, but when they found that she didn't have any money, the leader of the gang pulled a knife and ran the blade, roughly against her neck, instantly killing her,As she bled to death, she felt a painful pulling sensation of her soul leaving her body. and then, she blacked out.

Ichisake woke up, finding herself lying on the cold ground, she got up and looked around,then she saw one of her sisters walking by crying bitterly, as she called out to her, she realized that her sister couldn't see her. as she took this all in, she heard a blood curdling screech coming from something that was obviously not human, as she ran towards the opposite direction. a monster like being with a hole in its chest, came crashing through the wall. Her eyes widened in confusion and horror, as the beast lunged. a man came suddenly jumping out of no where unsheathing his sword, and to her amazement, the man with the sword slaughtered the beast with one strike. He put away his sword and motioned for her to follow him, still a bit shaken, she followed himas the moon began to rise.

When Ichisake got to the soul society, She enrolled into the academy, and mastered hand to hand combat,flash step,and kido, eventually becoming the captain of squad two. but when the war took place and she didn't return from battle. They assumed she was dead and forgot about her. Now ichisake wanders the world of the living.Still fulfilling her job as a soul reaper.

RP Sample: chisake sprinted through the valley, keeping an eye out for anything that seems unusual,things have been getting tense in the soul society and she has been working hard to accomplish the honor of being a captain, she gazed her eyes across the fields, her eyes steady and alert. suddenly,she froze as she sensed an overwhelmingly strong spiritual pressure.. what..what the hell is that?! she asked herself as she grabbed the hilt of her sword. she then hid her own spiritual energy, then she silently climbed a tree as gently and as swiftly as the wind that brushes past the grass, when she reached the top of the tree she hid among the leaves and waited. watching the owner of such strong spiritual energy come closer,she slowly then unsheathed her sword.

Her eyes now flickering red. she jumped from the trees making no noise whatsoever.She watched the stranger approach, and as the person came around the corner,Ichisake flash-stepped behind him and brought the sword down on his head only having it deflected by another. "what brings you here?" she demands suppressing a snarl that threatened to escape her lips. The man looked up slightly with an evil grin on his face,"you're worst nightmare." the strange man, then made a combo to her legs, arms, ankles, neck, and back.

Ichisake dodged all of these combos easily by flipping over the man.She landed on the opposite side, she turned and glared at him, her fighting stance tense,"state your name." she ordered harshly. The man looked at her and laughed,"i don't have time to introduce myself to such a weakling like yourself." and with that, the man appeared behind her, and pressed the edge of his blade on her neck, not cutting, but just to let her feel the cool metal that was pressed to her soft flesh.

Ichisake gritted her teeth, in slow anger,"get...that sword off my neck NOW!" she kicked the man to the ground and exploded into her wolf form, she snarled at the man, her now ruby red eyes lit up in anger. She pounced on him and bit his arm, but unfortunately for her, she was flipped over before she could yank his arm off. The man thrust his sword to her neck, reflexively, she jumped over the sword. The man grumbled a few unintelligible words and attacked again. Ichisake flipped over it (yes in wolf form) and pushed off the nearby tree, she howled and bit his face, leaving the man stumbling backwards with his bleeding cheek, he started cussing loudly, causing ichisake to bark slightly, sounding suspiciously like snickering.

the man lunged again, but unfortunately for him, he lunged at a wrong angle..leaving Ichisake the perfect spot to attack, she lunged upward and her mouth closed on the man's neck. With one sickening SNAP! the man's head rolled on the grassy floor. Ichisake changed back to her original floor, and wiped the blood off her mouth. she then wiped the sweat from her forehead, smirked and walked away. Just in time to see the sunrise...


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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySat Jul 24, 2010 3:50 pm

Division: squad 2

Rank: ex captain of squad 2

If the soul society has forgotten about her, she is no longer in a division and is considered a former shinigami

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Released Zanpakuto Description: Ichisake has the ability to control the wind and lightning, she can bend them to her will and create different techniques out of them. She also has enhanced speed and can move as fast as lightning.

So she can move at the speed of light?, remove the part with the enchanced speed, also, put in how much she can control thw wind and lighting, like can she create lighting clouds, tornado`s or such?

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Bankai Description: a 50 foot tall electric yellow wolf with a blue electric static charge glow surrounding it comes out of her blade , and she is capable of controlling ice as well.she can preform multiple techniques with it.

Remove the ice part, you already have the ability to use lighting and wind, a third element is something only a race leader is allowed. Also, does her zanpaktou transform into the wolf or does she still have the sword?

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Remove or edit every ability were she uses ice.

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Name:Electrified Shunko
effect:a burst of kido and electricity runs across her body and anything she attacks becomes either electrocuted or badly injured.
duration/cooldown: 4 posts and 2 posts to recharge.

How badly injuried are we talking about? Does it affect the whole thing if she just touches it, or just the area she touches? Also add a drawback

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Name: Heavan's hell
effect: the sky opens up and lightning,hurricanes,and ice daggers fall onto the enemy all at once striking them where they stand.
duration/cooldown:takes 2 posts to recharge.

Remove the ice part. How large of a area does it cover? How many lightings are formed and how big are they? How many hurricanes are formed and how big are they? Also, add a longer cooldown and at least 2 drawbacks

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Name:Sky commander's control
effect: she controls every storm that happens in the sky,from hurricanes,to thunder storms she can use any of the storms to attack the enemy.
duration/cooldown; 7 posts

Add a cooldown on at least 10 posts, add at least 5 restrictions, add 3 drawbacks, give more detail in how it works
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySat Jul 24, 2010 7:21 pm

is this alright? ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySat Jul 24, 2010 7:34 pm

Name:Mark of the wolf
Effect: if wolf bites its victim,its like getting struck by lightning except the person is technically struck on the inside of the body. Causing instant death, or eternal damage in the inside.
Duration and/or Cooldown:

Remove both instant death and eternal damage, you can have minor damages at max. Also make the cooldown at least 5 posts

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Name:Hurricane frenzy
Effect: when the wolf pounces, it trails a strong hurricane behind it, pursuing its victim, if the person gets caught they get hurled into the air.
Duration and/or Cooldown: for 4 posts

Add 8 posts cooldown and a 1 post duration.

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Name: Wolf pack Thunder whip
effect: 100 wolves created from electricity appear before the enemy and circle around them, closing in. As one powerful shock wave close in, it sparks a hurricane made entirely out of blue flames.not only will it electrocute the enemy but it will also rip him/her apart, burning their remains also leaving only but a pile of ash as the foe's remains.
duration/cooldown: 7 posts to be able to reuse the attack.

Remove this ability complety

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Name: Wolf Transfusion
Effect:without the blade of her Banki, the wolf can enter her body, giving her 50x the strength, speed, and more wolf like abilities like super hearing,better vision,slightly pointed teeth,sliver hair and skin, and a healing factor.
Duration and/or Cooldown: This ability lasts until somebody calms her down.

With a 50x increase it would make her at least 20 times as powerful as the captain commander(me). Reduce the increase to only double as much, and remove healing, super hearing and speed.

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Name: lightning rain
effect: 50 lightning bolts fall from the sky at strike at the enemy all at once.
Duration/cooldown: continues this for five to six posts and it takes 1 post to recharge.

Reduce the amount of lighting bolts to 10. How large are the lighting bolts and how fast do they travel? Reduce the duration to 1 post and the cooldown to 5 at minimum.

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Name:Electrified Shunko
effect: same effects as shunko except electricity runs across her body as well as kido and anything she touches becomes electrocuted.
duration/cooldown: she can use this technique for 5 posts and 4 posts to be able to reuse it.

You did not edit this ability at all, allow me to repeat myself.

How badly injuried are we talking about? Does it affect the whole thing if she just touches it, or just the area she touches? Also add a drawback. Reduce the duration to max 2 posts and the cooldown to 5 at least.
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySun Jul 25, 2010 11:46 am

i changed the abilities completely is this okay?
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySun Jul 25, 2010 12:04 pm

*kyuukyoku getsuei sutoraiku (ultimate moon strike): saying the name of her ultimate attack, All of the spiritual pressure within 100 miles radius is absorbed into her blade and blasts the enemy . The impact of her attack is like getting struck by 15 gran ray ceros.

First of all, reduce the "100 miles thing", to 10 feet max. Second, reduce the power level to 1 grand ray cero, add at least 2 drawbacks on her and add duration and cooldown(cooldown at least 6 posts)

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Released Zanpakuto Description: Ichisake has the ability to absorb spiritual energy, causing he blade to grow a dark blue. then she releases the energy into one gran ray cero like blast.the more she absorbs the powerful the blast gets.If she cuts her enemy, a large fraction of their spiritual energy is absorbed into her blade. She can choose to either use the absorbed spiritual energy to heal her wounds, increase her power,or blast the enemy.if she ends up killing her enemy with her sword. all of their spiritual energy adds to her own.


Reduce the amount that is absorbed by cut to a little fraction, remove the part with increasing power and healing wounds. How strong is the blast when she fires? Also, remove the part with adding spiritual energy to her own.

Add at least 1 drawback, duration(max 4 posts), and cooldown(minimum 7 posts)

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*increased spiritual pressure: being a captain and releasing her bankai makes ichisake's spiritual power more powerful than 3 captains put together but it cannot go any higher unless she where to kill a person with higher ranking in power and absorb his/her power.

Remove this ability complety.

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*it has the same abilities with shikai,but her blasts of energy are 5 times more powerful and faster than her shikai attack and its movements can be controlled.

Reduce the power to only double as powerfull, remove increase in speed, aswell as with "its movements can be controlled".

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enhanced speed: Ichisake becomes swift enough to leave an after seen image behind. Granting her the ability to confuse her enemies.

How fast are we talking about?

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*Moon shield: Ichisake's blast hardens and it expands into a 10 foot wide shield in the form of the full moon. its powerful enough to block a gran rey cero.

Add a cooldown(at least 5 posts), and a duration(max 2 posts), also remove the part of the "grand ray cero", and add in it can block the 10-5th espada`s cero. Also, can it be moved or does it just stand still?
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySun Jul 25, 2010 11:38 pm

Edited once again
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptySun Jul 25, 2010 11:47 pm

Released Zanpakuto Description: Ichisake has the ability to absorb spiritual energy, causing he blade to grow a dark blue. then she releases the energy into one gran ray cero like blast.the more she absorbs the powerful the blast gets.

How much is it caple of absorbing? Does it absorb all attacks? How does it absorb spirtual energy?

Also add a cooldown and duration
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*enhanced speed: Ichisake becomes swift enough to surpass soifon.

That does not exsplain how fast she is. Also, if you wanna surpass her, i need a 3 paragraph on how she trained it in the history.

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*Moon shield: Ichisake's blast hardens and it expands into a 10 foot wide shield in the form of the full moon. its powerful enough to block a gran rey cero and it cannot be moved. It can only stay up for one post at a time.


again you didn`t do what i told you to.


Add a cooldown(at least 5 posts), and a duration(max 2 posts), also remove the part of the "grand ray cero", and add in it can block the 10-5th espada`s cero. Also, can it be moved or does it just stand still?

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*Healing: By absorbing sporirtual energy into her blade and by cutting herself with it she can heal cuts,gashes,and burns.

I told you to remove the healing from your abilities befor, so delete this ability
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 8:53 am

done.....
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 12:03 pm

i see nothing wrong with it.....approved
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 12:46 pm

Unapproved.

Tia there is still to much power in the abilities.

Ichisake, if you want to be approved please do as i say, i dont want to keep repeating myself and i know you wanna roleplay.

*kyuukyoku getsuei sutoraiku (ultimate moon strike): saying the name of her ultimate attack, All of the spiritual pressure within 10 miles radius is absorbed into her blade and blasts the enemy . The impact of her attack is like getting struck by 5 gran ray ceros.

First of all, reduce the "10 miles thing", to 10 feet max. Second, reduce the power level to 1 grand ray cero, add at least 2 drawbacks on her and add duration and cooldown(cooldown at least 6 posts)

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Released Zanpakuto Description: Ichisake has the ability to absorb spiritual energy, causing he blade to grow a dark blue. then she releases the energy into one gran ray cero like blast.the more she absorbs the powerful the blast gets.It takes one post at a time to recharge her blade for attack.

How much is it caple of absorbing? Does it absorb all attacks? How does it absorb spirtual energy?

Also add a cooldown and duration

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*enhanced speed: Ichisake becomes swift enough to surpass soifon.

Add at least 2 paragraphs in your history on how you got to surpass soifon. Also, how much does she surpass her?




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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 12:58 pm

is this okay?
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 1:00 pm

it has the same abilities with shikai,but her blasts of energy are twice as powerful and faster than her shikai attack.and her blade breaks down the reiatsu in attacks like ceros, baalas, and other reiatsu made attacks and it is absorbed into her blade, it is used to also charge her blade.

This basicly means she can absorb ANY attack comming her way. What if the attack is element based?
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 1:04 pm

then she cant absorb it she can try to smash through the elemental attack but she cant absorb it


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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 1:04 pm

then please write it in
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 1:06 pm

all done ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 1:14 pm

approved then
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PostSubject: Re: Ichisake Mizuki    Ichisake Mizuki  EmptyMon Jul 26, 2010 1:17 pm

awesome ^^ thx
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