Mr.Whisper

Basic Information

Name: Mr.Whisper

Gender: Male

Age: 300+? Appears 16

Looks: look at avatar please

Personality: Mr.Whisper is always calm and quiet. He never likes to speak. he doesn't like to fight unless he as to. He has alot of pride and honour and is pretty arrogant. He knows how to fight and how to judge people to see if they are stronger or not. But he normally stays quiet, saying little but when he does he seems like an aristocrat.

Rank: ...I dunno?

Sexuality: Straight

Relationship Status: Single

Doll Information

Name: Peppy and Bliss

Manifestation:

Humanoid forms:

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Gun form:

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Element: Dark

Description:

Peppy controls shadows, full manipulation of shadows. When she is in humanoid form she holds a gun and controls shadows and fires special shadow bullets. When she transforms into a gun (fusing with Mr.Whisper), she gives him all her powers.

Bliss does the samething thing except she fires bullets that create everything of the opposite on whatever her bullets touch. So if she fires a bulelt at fire, it changes fire into either water or wind, as its her choice.

The bullets are dangerous and move at twice the speed of a bala and can explode with power of 5 pounds of c4 each. The shadow bullets, when they explode, spray an area of 5 metres with shadow instead of light.

Character ability:

Teleportation: He can use raw teleportation, nothing similar to shunpo, soinido or equivelent, it takes him away completely and appear in another region, regardless of obstacles, the down side is that he can only use this in a 100m radius.


Techniques

Shadow techs:

Shadow sew: If anyone is on the ground and this is activated, after 3 posts anyone who tries to go higher than a foot of the ground is pulled back to the ground by their shadow, if they try and do it again, the shadow wraps around their leg and will tear into their system and paralyse them for 1 post. If they are in the air and come down to touch te ground after the 3 posts, the same rule applys. If they do it again, they are pinned for an extra post, this increases with each turn they try and jump away.

Shadow burst: A shot fired from any of the guns into a shadow can appear from another shadow. This is passive and can occur at any time

Shadow step: stepping on a shadow can teleport mr.whisper to another shadow

Shadow fiend: firing a pullet into an enemy's shadow causes the shadow to transmutate into a mnster where it attacks the enemy.

Shadow hymn: A bullet fired into a shadow causes another shadow to explode into a tyndril of shadow, with an explosive power equal to that of a level 80 kido. If he charges this shot for 1 post it increases to a level 90 kido shot and for 2 posts it increases to a level 95 shot, if charged for 3 posts its equal to a level 100 kido shot.

Opposite techs:

Total nullification: This can be only used once every 6 posts, this shot completely negates one attack, shield or any matter, firing an opposite.

Combination: Combining with shadow bullets to form a new shadow-opposite bullets that can do various things.

Loss of bliss: These shots affect zanpakutou, resurcion, doll, or any items that are in control of an enemy, upon collision they don't harm, they just cause the control to be off opposite; so if a zanpakutou is struck, any commands given will have the order reversed for 2 posts. If the enemy tries to be smart and use opposite orders, the zanpakutou will follow it.

i.e.

Enemy - Use fire at the enemy; instead fire will attack the user, so the user goes "mhmm attack me with fire" to try and counter the oppositeness but in truth the zanpakutou will follow it and burn the user again.

History and RP Sample

History: Mr.Whisper has no real history, he woke up one day, the side of his head bleeding, while a note lay at his side with a two rings, the note was from his brother who went missing. It was said his brother was killed but Mr.Whisper didn't believe it, he knew he had a brother, but he cou;dn't remember anything from his past, he had no name and he just assasinated people only giving them a whisper before bringing their deaths. So he christened himself "Mr.whisper" and swore to find his brother.

It was a long journey, hardships crossed his path, though he took none took to his liking. His guns were his closest brethren, he hunted his own kind, other kind; anything that stood in his way, met it's own death. A painful one, if I may add. There was no way in hell Mr.Whisper would let his victims go without any form of torture; his knowledge of "informants" was accurate to the highest decree, he picked his targets well and true. He tortured them with simplicity but in reality it was that, the simplic nature of his torture, that brought out the weakness in his victims. It was sad to say, they never really had an opportunity to live, most of his victims never did last long, especially under the torture, even if they did, they had very little to say, often having nothing, expecting mercy to glaze across their body and free them from hienous crimes. Pity, it was. They died mercilessly and in vain. Though it bothered, not, the child like man, for he would scower the endless world for the very sake of his kin, his past and his virtue.

RP Sample:

"Hey where is my brother?" said Mr.Whisper, his gun pointing at the man's head. The man shook, his pants began to get with with his own pee.

"I not know! I not know!" he exclaimed as he looked at the gun, tears fell from his eyes and sweat was covering his face. Mr.Whisper didn't care, the man was trash; he was going to die anyway. Mr.Whisper smiled slowly, pulling the trigger, as the bullet entered the mans head and killing him in one.

"Vermin" Mr.Whisper said as he spat on the corpse of the man. Walking away, annoyed that he had wasted his time on scum.

You need a longer bio.

Made the history longer, yupp yupp =)

Quote :

Peppy controls shadows, full manipulation of shadows. When she is in humanoid form she holds a gun and controls shadows and fires special shadow bullets. When she transforms into a gun (fusing with Mr.Whisper), she gives him all her powers.

How many bullets can she fire at a time? How fast do they go? Also, are they made from shadows, and if so do her bullets still work when there are no shadows?

The techniques in the techniques section - can they only be used when Mr Whisper is fused with his dolls?

Quote :

Teleportation: He can use raw teleportation, nothing similar to shunpo, soinido or equivelent, it takes him away completely and appear in another region, regardless of obstacles, the down side is that he can only use this in a 100m radius.

Is it similar to shunpo/sonido in the fact that it can be used as many times as he wants whenever he wants?

Quote :

Shadow sew: If anyone is on the ground and this is activated, after 3 posts anyone who tries to go higher than a foot of the ground is pulled back to the ground by their shadow, if they try and do it again, the shadow wraps around their leg and will tear into their system and paralyse them for 1 post. If they are in the air and come down to touch te ground after the 3 posts, the same rule applys. If they do it again, they are pinned for an extra post, this increases with each turn they try and jump away.

How many times can this be used in a fight? If multiple times, then you will need to have a cooldown for it. When you say 'tear into their system' do you mean that the shadow breaks through their skin? How long does this attack last for? How does an opponent fight against this technique?

Quote :

Shadow fiend: firing a pullet into an enemy's shadow causes the shadow to transmutate into a mnster where it attacks the enemy.

How many times can he use this technique, and how frequently?

Quote :

Shadow hymn: A bullet fired into a shadow causes another shadow to explode into a tyndril of shadow, with an explosive power equal to that of a level 80 kido. If he charges this shot for 1 post it increases to a level 90 kido shot and for 2 posts it increases to a level 95 shot, if charged for 3 posts its equal to a level 100 kido shot.

Does he decide which shadow explodes - or is it random? Also, how many times can he use this technique in a fight? When he charges his weapon is he still able to fight? I think that having the blasts equal to levels 80, 90, 95 and 100 numbered kidos is too powerful. I will allow the shot charged for 3 posts equal level 80 kido, so please adjust the other ones accordingly. Considering that a level 31 (Shakkaho) kido is extremely deadly and powerful, I think that I'm being generous in allowing level 80.

Quote :

Total nullification: This can be only used once every 6 posts, this shot completely negates one attack, shield or any matter, firing an opposite

What is the cooldown for this attack - how many posts need to pass before you can use it again?

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Combination: Combining with shadow bullets to form a new shadow-opposite bullets that can do various things

I'm going to need you to elaborate on 'can do various things' - what things can it do?

Quote :

Loss of bliss: These shots affect zanpakutou, resurcion, doll, or any items that are in control of an enemy, upon collision they don't harm, they just cause the control to be off opposite; so if a zanpakutou is struck, any commands given will have the order reversed for 2 posts. If the enemy tries to be smart and use opposite orders, the zanpakutou will follow it.

What is the cooldown for this attack - how many posts pass before it can be used again? How many times can it be used in a fight? How does the enemy's weapon know whether its weilder is telling it what it wants it to do, thus making it do the opposite, or whether the weilder is telling it to do the opposite of what they want to do, making it follow orders?

Sorry for slow reply my net had died for a day.

Okay answering your questions with numbers to make it easier.

I just wanna say. I personally think my character is under powered (I may be wrong, I've intended this character to be weak), I'm more than happy to answer your questions, though I feel like I'm being disected :S

Yes those abilities only become available to Mr.Whisper when he fuses with his dolls and they become guns. Though when they seperate each doll retains its own respective techniques and the dolls can personally use the techniques to their will.

1. 1 shot per thought or squeeze of the trigger, bear in mind this is in bleach terms and because hes used its soo frequently he can squeeze the trigger multiple times per second. I told you all the bullets move at double the speed of bala, because most bullets move fast, I don't want slow bullets easily avoided. Yes they are normal bullets that can seep through shadows and explode into shadows.

2. Well considering no one has a real limit on their shunpo/soinido, I'll say he can use it as he wishes.

3. This lasts for 10 posts after the 3 post cool down and the enemy has touched the ground. With a cool down of 3 posts, so in total its 6 posts cool down if you consider the 3 post charge up. Yepp it seeps into their skin and I'm going to add, that while pinned to the ground, they can't use shunpo, soinido or any of the equivelent. They can avoid it by not touching the ground during the charge up phase or touching the ground at all.

4. Shadow fiend: Well this can be done to 1 enemy at a time. It lasts until it is destroyed, having said this, any use of light arsenal, i.e. fire, light or anything that produces light can destroy it. So I think thats fairly fair. With a cool down of 3 posts on enemy used.

5. Well. Okay. I was trying to be reasonable but that got out of hand. Yes kido 80 is powerful but having said that, I would be waiting 3 posts and firing a level 80 kido which everyone would avoid anyway. Its safe to say, everyone will be avoiding it because thats general law of rping. Plus, I think its not fair for me to wait 3 posts to fire a level 80 kido bullet which can be blocked with danku or people firing off level 90 kidos within a single post. I'm sorry to say but thats abit harsh on my part no? Can we negotiate on something abit better? Otherwise I'm going to be HEAVILY hindered. he chooses the shadow.

6. LOL. This was a funny question. "Once every 6 posts" that is the cool down, which means 1 shot followed by 6 posts of waiting time :S

7. Well for instance, the shadow bullets they are normal bullets but explode into shadows and such shadow is destroyed by light attacks, but when combined with an opposite bullet, it can lead to the shadows growing exponentially when exposed to light attacks, eating the light if you will and in turn developing the shadows.

8. 6 shots with 2 post cool down, reason being is that MAJORITY of my attacks will be avoided, dodged. I know that and everyone knows that. My character is a ranged based fighter, meaning its automatically hard for him to fight alongside meleers. I understand that and I thought this would give me an edge even knowing that the bullets will be dodged. It breaks the connection between spirit and weilder, disrupting it more like, and the orders are inverted. Though if the spirit and weilder are in great sync or can have a ichigo moment then the effects can be nullified, though if that were to happen I'd like to see like at least 3-4 paragraphs of GOOD depth writing. I don't want people going

"Yeah me and zangetsu are in love yaya" and be all good. No.

That's ok I'm glad you feel dissected, because that tells me I'm doing my job right

Lol, that one that asks what the cooldown is when it already said it - when you pointed it out I'm like 'what?' Must not have been thinking when I looked at that attack

Everything looks good with all the attacks, so lets talk about Shadow Hymn:
A level 80 kido is an extremely power kido, considering in canon Bleach there is only 99 in each group of kido and a lot of shinigami can't do it, probably only some captains, lieutenants and very strong 3rd seats - even then most of those people would still need the chant, which may or may not take 1 whole post. So, how about:

Instantly: level 31, but you can fire two bullets, so it's like firing two simultaneous level 31's
1 post power up: level 65, again, can fire two shots
2 post power up: level 80

What do you think about this as a compromise? If you can think of something better just let me know

Thank you ma'am.

Seems perfectly fine. I just have two questions:

1. For the two shots. Can I perhaps have 1 normal shot at either instant or 2 post charge up time and have the the 2nd bullet be charging for 3 post shot?

2. While we are now going into development? I was wondering would be there opporunities for bount to grow? Learn new abilities, improve the shadow hymn and as such?

Many thanks.

Has been a pleasure being "disected" by you ;D

P.s. I'm not going to edit my application, I'm sure if anyone whom has issues can just scroll down =). Plus I'm not likely to abuse (not that I want to anyway), especially with you around xD.

That's fine with 1. And yes, bounts can grow and learn new abilities and such. The way they do that it by either training - for any significant change it needs to be a fair amount of training topics, and in them it needs to state that he's learning a new ability and practicing it etc. The other way is by increasing his power, and it's a bit harder to do, because it involves absorbing souls high in spirit power, eg, shinigami, vizard, hollow/arrancar and special humans.

Well it has been a pleasure dissecting you approved ^^ At the moment I'll give you midlevel/mid, but that may change before the system is in place, so keep that in mind.