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 Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell

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PostSubject: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 2:58 am

Basic Information

Name: Iris Ringbell

Age: Unknown

Gender: Male

Rank: Arrancar/Espada

Number: 3

Looks: Iris is a slender, yet fairly muscular, male Arrancar of average height with a properly organized appearance, a dark back hair which hung on both of his cheeks, far complexion skin, a normal colored lip, and onyx back eyes. He is standing with a height of 169 cm or (5'6½") and a weight of 55 kg or (121 lbs.), fairly average for a man. His facial expression rarely changes, and he is almost always seen very serious. . He wears typical Arrancar clothes: a white jacket with six symmetrical black rectangles lined up to down, black sash, and a white hakama. However, his jacket seems to have longer coattails than others, and the collar is rather high. Like other Arrancar, Iris has a skull shaped round collar on his neck appearing as a very short necklace.

Hollow Hole: Center Of the Heart

Mask Fragment: A skull shaped round collar on his neck appearing as a very short necklace.

Number Tattoo: 4

Personality:

Iris has a very cold personality which makes him feel indifferent from other people even to his comrades. During battles, he is very willing and open to kill both of his comrades and opponents without a second thought. He is often seen alone which he finds comfortable than to be someone who makes uneseccary noise. He sees everyone as like him who stands as a single drop of a giant ocean where earth comes natural. His cold demeanor allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised or caught off-guard. Despite his reputation and prowess as an Arrancar, Iris has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities. His calm attitude is used to his advantage in battle, as it becomes easier for him to maintain his composure to stay focused on the situation at hand, and ultimately notice everything around him. As a result, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents.

Sexuality: Straight

Relationship Status: Single

Resurrecion Information

Name: Tormenta De Medianoch

Represent: Skeleton Dove

Family: Lightning

Sealed Descrition

Iris' Zanpakuto takes a form of a rapier on its sealed state. It has a silver guard which covers the wielder's fist upon used, it has also a silver colored blade with a height of 1.5 meters long, and a small white skull on the tip of the handle wrapped by a white leather leaving no diamond shapes. It has a white sheath at the left side of his waist inserted on his black belt allowing him to draw the sword easily since he is left handed.

Looks:

Before releasing the true form of Iris' blade, Tormenta De Medianoche, a great spiritual pressure will be felt for miles and miles. It will slowly shatter the ground were Iris stands, breaking any binding spell or technique used to him before he will reveal the releasing phrase. Thin layer of lightning current will release from all the angles of his body which has a thickness of four centimeters electrocuting anyone who makes contact with him. Iris will then speak the word caída (which means fall in english) which would release a great burst of violet lightning current from all the angles of his body up to ten meters of distance electrocuting anyone who gets caught. After the short ceremony of performing the Resurrección, Iris will appear with his real hollow form.

In Iris' Resurrección released state, the skull shaped necklace will distribute all over his body forming the skull between his chest. His Arrancar suit changes to the color of medium blue with both black vertical line from his neck down to the bottom of his suit and a horizontal lines which extends from the skull's sides forming a back cross with the skull as the vertex, then left to flare out into ragged ends, much like Ichigo's Bankai. He will also have a pair of shoulder guards same to the color of his outfit. And also a pair of gloves with a black intersecting lines forming a cross and is long enough to cover his elbow. His fingernails will grow in length and will be sharpen allowing him to use it like a blade. Also, the remain of his hollow mask located at the left part of his head centers atop of his head with two long sharp horns and one additional hollow mask remain on the bottom of his jaw same to Yammy's. Lastly, a pair of black wings will appear at his back allowing him to fly in the air at high speeds.

Techniques

Arrancar Benefits:

Name: Black Cavity [Garganta]
State: -
Description: An espada's way of getting around through the human world and Hueco mundo.

Name: Probe Circuit [Pesquisa]
State: -
Description: An Arrancar's ability to detect, sense and gauge the amount of Reiatsu in his or her vicinity. It functions similarly to Sonar.

Name: Zero [Cero]
Color: Blue
State: -
Description: These are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers.

Name: Bullet [Bala]
State: -
Description:Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.

Name: Grand King Cero [Gran Rey Cero]
Color: Blue
State: Normal/Ressurecion/Segunda Stapa
Description: Gran Rey Cero is performed when an Arrancar draws blood from the Cero firing appendage with their Zanpakutō and mixing their blood with their original Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power, size, speed, and force, as well as a change of color. This Cero is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, and is capable of disturbing the fabric of space. When fired, it spins like a razor upon release and compress and decompress, due to the sheer speed and raw power. Unlike most Ceros that mainly take the shape of a sphere created by user and released in a huge blast wave, the Gran Rey Cero, when fired, keeps its sphere form, even after being fired in a huge blast wave.

Name: Negation [Negación]
State: -
Description: Energy fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Negación fields surround a target in a square beam of light that isolates the target from the dimension they are currently in, making it impossible to harm them. The field then pulls the target towards the Menos that created the field.

Name: Dark Zero [Cero Oscuras]
State: Ressurecion/Segunda Stapa
Description: This is an Espada's fully charged Cero in their released forms and unlike many other Ceros this one is very powerful and ranges more than the Gran Rey Cero. This blast will destroy all destructible defense, ignore invulnerability, and if interrupted, it may be shot again without its cooldown in effect. This skill may be charged and be shot off by small beams, while maintaining its orb form in the users' palm, or body part until the orb is gone. Four shots that are about smaller than a normal pillar Cero, but quicker that it will dissipate the orb. The destruction power is about equivalent to a Gran Rey Cero. Post Durations: 1 Post. (May be held onto until 4 Shots are taken separately.), Cooldown: 4 Posts. (Will be ignored if the Cero is interrupted.)

Enhanced Speed, Sonido, Stamina, Hierro, and Spiritual Power.

Innate Ability:

Name: Midnight Lightning Bala [Relámpago Bala de la medianoche]
State: -
Description: A blue colored bala in Iris' version. This bala are infused with electricity so it could pass through metal defenses. It may paralyze opponents for 2 posts if in contact. Cooldown: 2

Name: Spiritual Spear [Lanza espiritual]
State: -
Description: Generates a blue spiritual spear than can be used on melee attacks or as a projectile. Can pierce through Hierro.

Name: Rain Of Cero [Lluvia del Cero ]
State: -
Description: Fires a single Cero at the sky, then few seconds will pass, countless beams of thinner Cero will strike at the opponent.

Name: Storm Creation [Creación de la tormenta]
State: -
Description: Creates a normal rain into the area. Dramatically increasing his lightning attack's ranges. Cooldown: 3, Duration: 5

Name: Lightning Beam [Viga del relámpago]
State: -
Description: Fires a blue lightning bolt from his finger. Extremely more powerful than Hado #4.

Name: Midnight Zero [Cero de la Medianoche]
State: -
Description: A large beam of spiritual energy which has the power of Hado #89. If this Cero would be absorbed, the victim will suffer tremendous lightning shock. Can't be stopped by Danku. Cooldown: 4

Name: Lightning Armor [Armadura del relámpago]
State: -
Description: When releasing the high electricity current to all angles and directions of the body, an electrical discharge flows from the user's entire body allowing him to conduct the pressure of electrical current to any metal conductor. The body of the person touched by the armor will misinterpret the lightning current as "electrical signals from the nerves," making its muscles contract. This causes the body to involuntarily go stiff, while at the same time receives damage. The lightning discharge also increases his defense, negating damage from weaker attacks. Cooldown: 3 posts, Duration: 5 posts

Name: Soul Power Absorb [La energía del alma absorbe ]
State: -
Description: An idea from Bountou. Iris can absorb one's soul to gain their enhancements and powers. Unlike Bounts, Iris' absorption takes a 2 posts to be completed. Once completed, Iris power will grow depending on the soul he absorbed. However, there are some simple conditions, the victim must be defeated because their spiritual power may cancel this ability.. Two enhancement per victim
Shinigami - Enhanced Spiritual Power, Enhanced Speed
Arrancar - Enhanced Hierro, Enhanced Bala/Cero, Enhanced Speed, One technique
Bount - Bito, Enhanced Strength, Enhaced Stamina, Immortality [Non-aging]
Vizard - One of the mask enhancements, One Kido, Second Spiritual Source
Quincy - Enhanced Speed, Enhanced Stamina, Enhanced Spiritual Power
Superhuman - Enhanced Speed, Strength, Stamina, Endurance, Defense

Ressurecion State:

Name: Lightning Javelin Regeneration Regeneración de Jabalina de Relámpago [Lightning Javelin Regeneration]
State: Ressurecion, Segunda
Description: For having a great manipulation and shaping of violet lightning, Iris can generate lightning condensed violet javelins with a length of two meters, which could be used as projectile by throwing them or a melee weapon. He could generate this weapon simultaneously faster than drawing his sword in his sheath. This shaped weapon is nearly unblockable as the radiating and chirping javelin can easily cut and pierce through steel. When stabbed so deeply into the opponent's body, their body goes numb due to an electrical current which causes the muscles to go stiff, taking away their ability to move. Also, when stabbed on one of the opponent's vital point, the radiating weapon could obviously kill them. Iris could generate any amount of javelin he wants but he could only wield two javelins at a time.

Name: Dé la Bienvenida, Tormenta Violada [Welcome, Violet Storm]
State: Ressurecion, Segunda
Description: Iris' ultimate ability, rarely used on some simple battle occasions instead used on needed situations. To use this ability, he must speak the name of the ability [of course, in Spanish] while sending his massive violet spiritual power into the sky. The bright sky will be covered by dark clouds he created using his spiritual power, a loud thunder roar will be heard all over the place [or simply all over the topic], then violet raindrops will fall and in few seconds more raindrops will fall heavily turning the rainstorm into a thunderstorm. This thunderstorm is pretty useful for Iris since he is using lightning-based projectiles which will extends its distance or range by twenty meters and the speed will be prettily compared to the speed of a bala. Also, during this state, Iris will have a use of the lightning bolts from the sky since the concept of almost all his attacks and defense are based on electrical currents. His overwhelming manipulation of lightning can be useful to guide lightning bolts from the sky into his the area where he stands, in that case, he may use his ability to eat or simply absorb lightning current and convert it into his own energy and stamina especially when he is near to death. However, this can only be used once in a battle for saving his ass. The rain stops after five posts, clearing the sky, turning back the light. The technique can still be used if ever there's already rain occurring in the topic. [Used once per battle with a duration of six posts]

Name: Lightning Spears Rain [El relámpago alancea la lluvia ]
State: Ressurecion, Segunda
Description: Iris will send a single Violet Lightning Spear into the sky, then after few seconds. Countless Spears will strike down the enemy for one post. Cooldown: 2

Name: Lightning Spear Cutter [Cortador de la lanza del relámpago ]
State: Ressurecion, Segunda
Description: Iris will extend his lightning spear's length up to 30m stabbing anything that will be caught. Then Iris will have the chance to swing it like a sword to cut all victims around him. Cooldown: 5

Name: Lightning Sound Step [Paso sano del relámpago ]
State: Ressurecion, Segunda
Description: Iris' version of Sonido during his Ressurecion. Iris may create dozens of afterimages using this skill. His speed may be also compared to a lightning bolt which travels faster than sound.

Name: Lightning Skin [Piel del relámpago ]
State: Ressurecion, Segunda (Passive)
Description: During this state, Iris' skin can electrocute enemy upon contact.

Ressurecion Enhancements: Speed, Hierro, Regeneration, Cero/Bala, Sonido, Strength.

Segunda Stapa State:

Looks: During his transformation, Iris' hollow remain will go over his face appearing as a unique version of a Vizard's hollow mask. But unlike a hollow mask, Iris' is violet-colored, has two white horns, and a hollow mouth with sharp teeth. His eyes will appear hollow-like and is shaped like a dove. His hair will go longer and is ragged like his robe. His violet robe will be narrow with a hole at the center of the heart. Sleeves are also up to his elbow, his hollow claw will go sharper but smaller so he can use a black, long and sharp blade on his left hand. Ragged ends at his robe will still remain like when he is still in the 1st Ressurecion state. Also, his wings will remain the same.

Enhancements:

Telekenesis - Iris can move things that he is not touching

Black Lightning - Iris' blue lightning turns to black with red outlines.

Black Flame - Iris' can also create flames same to the color of his black lightning.

Enhanced Cero - His blue cero will turn to dark violet, capable of defeating most of Espada's Gran Rey Cero and causing large scale destruction to large portion of the surroundings. It is fired from between the tips of his horns or any part of the body.

Immense Strength - During this state, all invulnerabilities or any damage reduction abilities will be useless. His strength also allows him to cut several buildings in one slash.

Immense Lightning Sound Speed/Sonido - Iris can use the maximum limit of Sonido during this state. It is overwhelming that he can move to long distances which eyes can't follow. Also, he can create hundreds of afterimages by using the Lightning Sound Step ability.

Enhanced Durability - Iris' durability has greatly increased, able to withstand several large explosions in battles against a strong opponents at close range with no visible damage. He can survive damage up to Kido # 90

High-Speed Regeneration - This enhancement allows him to grow his limbs in high-speeds if lost or cut-off.

Hierro - Along with his strength, his Hierro stops techniques or spells that creates devastating destructive attacks.

Techniques:

Name: Illuminating Heaven [Cielo que ilumina ]
State: Segunda Stapa
Description: During Segunda Stapa, Iris can create jet-black hell flames which is capable of eating and corroding its victim. Once contacted, these flames will weaken opponent's spiritual power and all of his enhancements. In other words, Absorbing. The flame also has the temperature and heat of the sun which can easily burn opponent like an acid. If the opponent fails to escape this flame, it will cover his whole body then turn him to ash. Cooldown: 5

Name: Deflection [Desviación]
State: Segunda Stapa
Description: Iris' Telekinesis ability extension. He can deflect attacks the way that he could withstand them. Any attack will be deflected using this technique. This can be done once per two posts.

Name: Grand Zero Cannon Barrage [Presa del Cañón del Gran Cero]
State: Segunda Stapa
Description: To use this technique, Iris must first use Sonido so a number of afterimages will serve as a clone (seven is the limit). These clones will charge Gran Rey Cero at the same time (including Iris). After charging, the clones will fire up the Gran Rey Cero they've charged into the desired target. It can possible used to multiple opponents. If ever it will be aimed at the ground, it would possibly create a wide wasteland. Cooldown: 10, Duration: 1

Name: Independent Zero [Independiente Cero]
State: Segunda Stapa
Description: A version of Cero that needs no Arrancar to guide. Iris will simply point at the target then the Cero will remain at the air, charging itself. Iris can freely make another Cero while the other Cero is charging itself. By using his speed, Iris can make ten charging Cero at the same that would result a large and versatile attack. 4 post Cooldown after making 10 Cero.

Name: Skull Shield
State: Segunda Stapa (Passive)
Description: All body damages are ignored. On other attacks, the ability reduces their damage.

History and RP Sample

History:

A hundred years passed, Kylandre was named Kyle Chandler de la Cruz. He was born in the peaceful city of Cagayan de Oro in the country of the Philippines. He was the third child among the five children of the family so the attention of his parents were oftenly focused on the eldest and the youngest children. His father was the president on one of the biggest company of the and while his mother owns a popular restaurant. This was the reason for them to live in a mansion with several maids for different household works and drivers for different kinds of cars. Kyle's life was like a living prince of a fairytale but for him, he was the loneliest kid in the wide planet. It was rare for his parents to talk to him since the favorite of his father was the eldest and for his mother was the youngest child of the family. It wasn't easy for him to live in the middle of the family especially when he is just worth for last. Time have passed, it was too late for him to know that his parents were five years divorced and each of them have their new own partner. The loneliness pushed him to be part of a fraternity which turn to hazing and was the reason of his death.
Iris Chandler of the de la Cruz family died because of hazing. It was too late for his parents to read the daily message he writes on his notebook. They were awakened to read his messages to them which they realized that they have a good son named Iris. Both of them were crying at the day of his burial. His parents decided to bring their family back again for their remaining four children that they were afraid to lose.

Iris opened his eyes expecting that he was in the hospital or in their house. He was mentioning the names of the persons he thought who brought him on the place. He saw some people passing by and he wondered why they weren't listening. He realized that he was just a spirit with a chain becoming shorter and shorter as the time passed. He was very lonely, and his loneliness ate him. He was crying and thinking about not having enough joy when he was still on earth. His wish was only to feel love, not a rain of coins, but a love of a mother and a father. While crying, the chain started to break, a feeling of darkness is eating his existence, a white skull mask was building on his face as he cries, and his body was starting to change into another form of specie. He didn't realized, he opened a black dimension which is unfamiliar for him, t was the Garganta which brought him into the land called Las Noches, where he can find different kinds of his fellow-hollow.

His life as a mindless monster, or simply hollow started, he was feeling a great loneliness who starts to starve himself. He found some human with souls when he was traveling, he tried to taste one of them and he felt a great feeling which reduced his loneliness. From that testing, he started to devour several human souls, he wasn't contented so his need of souls increased, he started to devour hundreds of human souls until he reached thousands of them. The only thing on his mind was to devour, to reduce the loneliness he is feeling.

Time had passed, the weight of human souls to his need was just a candy so he started to eat fellow hollows with equal size of him, then he proceed to devour hollows larger than him. After eating a massive amount of souls, he realized he was starting to evolve into another kind of hollow, a Menos Grande or simply Gillian. He can feel that his power is increasing while his need of soul becomes very heavy. Kyle was then living in a forest which he found thousands of his kind. As the amount of hollow he is eating increased, his mask have changed into a different one which made him control his own mind. His hunger for joy to fill his loneliness disturbed his mind so he started to devour all other Gillians, larger or smaller than him or any kind. Eating such a massive mob of his kind wasn't still enough for him to reduce the loneliness he is feeling. He moved to the other side of the mountain and he found some other group of his kind, he started to bite one until other Gillians bite their comrades which started into a trouble. After devouring, he started to fee that his power is increasing turning him into another level of hollow, the Adjuchas.

The life of a Adjuchas was like living in a jungle for him, eating which is arger or even smaller than him. Assassinating other hollows he sees. When starting the life of an Adjuchas, he was turning his head back to where he was. He decided to compare the tastes of a normal hollow from a Gillian to an Adjuchas. He started to started to taste the low-leveled hollows then the massive mob of tall Gillians and the last was the fellow Adjuchas. He stated that the taste was the same yet the weight of reducing his loneliness was different. He started to devour some Adjuchas which has equal or the same power to him, then he moved to larger ones, and he proceed to the flying ones. He found some other Adjuchas which he tried to kill. They stated that when he stop devouring other hollows, they will revert back to Gillian. The statement awakened him so he tried to kill the ones who told him and proceed to kill other hollows without an end. He can feel that his power is growing His endless devouring increased his rank into the power of a Vaste Lorde. He remembered what a hollow said to him that he will be very stronger is he will rip it off. Kyle was confused about the information, he wants to be a Vaste Lorde but he also want to be stronger than it.

Slowly, he removed his mask, the feeling of loneliness was starting to fade away as he was removing. His face started to show, touching the cold wind he didn't feel a while ago. A group of hollows were watching him as he was ripping it off. Immediately, he throw his mask in the air showing his face but the quarter part of the mask remained. The mask in the air turn into pieces as fine as an ash, spiritual pressure started to burst sending the hollow audience away from him, killing the near ones into shreds. Then he appeared naked with hollow remains on his neck and on the left part of his head. A person with white outfit saw him and discovered his power staring at him from head to toe. The person gave Kyle a red robe tell him to follow in the place they called "base".

Following the unknown person, he was brought into a very huge fortress. Kyle asked the unknown man about the place and he answered that it was a place owned by the King of the hollows, Shuei Setsuna. They offered Kyle a white suit same to them but in different style and sent him in a place where three violent huge hollows with a great hunger, he need to defeat them for observation. Next, they trained him to use his innate ability o they could teach him how to use it in most effective ways. Many years later, Kyle was given a name of Iris as the merge version of Kyle Andre. Andre was the one who told him to rip off his mask so changed his name for tribute.

RP Sample:

In the room which Raiken slept in everything was silent and no light from the outside could pierce it's way through the dark, doubled layered material that was his curtains. Raiken sat up in bed as he slowly rubbed the sleep out of his eyes. As he opened them, he could barely see in his room and sat upright in his bed beginning to think, ponder about what venture he would go on today. Ideas and thoughts shuffled through his mind about possible things and adventures that he could go on but these days he didn't really have much to do. The academy was going to officially open in a couple of weeks and in the time before that Raiken was free to do whatever he felt like in the long and arguous days that life brought him. He wasn't complaining, this would give him a chance to really explore hidden areas of the village which he wasn't allowed to before, or practice his ninja skills before the big day would arrive. All Raiken knew was that he had to find something to do today or he would be stuck at home with his mother again bored out his tree.

Raiken slowly got up out of bed like any young boy would do in the direction of the window. He was going by the bearings that his memory had of his room as he couldn't see his hand in front of him it was so dark. He slowly pulled the curtains back and a rush of sunlight pierced it's way through the window in front of him. Raikenquickly shut his eyes, and after a few minutes opened them again slowly, giving them time to adjust to the new light in the room. He looked up into the sky to see a bright blue blanket spread across it, without a cloud in site. Raiken always knew what the day was going to be like by looking at the sky. It was part of his clan heritage which he valued and respected very much. He was always intreged with the sky above him and could look at it hours on end without moving. But he wasn't going to do that today, no he was going to first have a shower and then travel into the inner city of Kumogakure to scope out something interesting to to.

After having a shower at home and eating the breakfast his mother laid out of him on the table he packed up a few things and told her he was going out for the day. Like always she said "Be careful Raiken, you never know what kind of nasty person is out there," and like always he shrugged it off. Raiken stepped out onto the walm stone path just outside his house searching which way to go, he had to find the fasted route to town as he was going on foot. On his travels he began to think of something to do for he was bored out of his mind. He scanned what was the inner city of Kumogakure a head of him, as his home was not far away from town only a couple minutes walk. He scanned over all the old buildings and shops looking for a place for his adventure to start. He passed many places all for which he ahd been before. Finally he stopped and glanced at a large building in front of him. It was very old looking like every other building in the cvillage, but enscribed on the side of the large stair case leading up to a large wooden door was the word [Library].

Raiken stopped and looked up at the building which towered over him like he was an ant. It had surprised him but he had never been here before. Such a large building and his mother never took him there. Raiken was fascinated by the large building and he slowly walked up the steps to venture inside. It was easy to say that Raiken wasn't obsessed or intreged by books and scrolls that much, but that wasn't the main reason he was here. Sure, he would give a couple a good go at reading them but it had never really interested him that much. What Raiken really wanted to do was venture through the library and find secret rooms and catacombs which no one knew about but the Raikage himself. Raiken had quite the imagination on him like any other young, curious boy his age. As he walked up to the top of the steps he began to slowly push on the large double wooden doors. Crazy ideas and thoughts rushed through his mind like a stick being swept down a rushing stream. As the large doors began to open Raiken wondered what amazing things would be inside. His adventure for the day was just beginning....

Raiken pushed the large wooden doors open with force as they were quite heavy. He wondered why it wasn't open already, it was the middle of the day and he was sure many people would pass through the place, it was just rude to have the doors shut. Raiken wasn't completely wrong either. The library wasn't exactly packed but it still had a large number of people walking around, or reading books at tables. The inside was quite elaborate and decrative. The inside of the building was as old-fashioned as the outside, and this was to be expected. Raiken walked inside slowly his eyes darting from one side of the room to the other. He had never seen so many books and scrolls in his life before, the walls being covered in them in all directions.

Raiken walked up the main enterance up to a counter. There was a small, older looking lady perched in a black chair behind the large counter writing on a long scroll. "Well hello there dear, how may I help you?" she said with a kind voice. Raiken didn't really know what he wanted, he wasn't exactly sure what to look for in the his. He asked her about the place and what kinds of things he could find in here. She replied quickly and proptly, spitting out a thousand words at a time, explaining everything there is to know about books. Raiken's brain could barely handle everything she was saying so he politely ended the conversation and went to explore the area himself.

There were many corridors and rooms which people were quietly sat at reading or writing. Naturally, Raiken came across area's which he and the public were restricted to and he thought this must be the area where the hidden secrets of the village were kept or forbidden jutsu for ninja never to set their eyes on. He turned his head to the left, and then to the right. The corridor on which he stood was empty except his own two feet. He then went to turn the knob on the turn to open it, being very cautious not to set off any alarms or anything. But the door wouldn't budge so he looked around up and over it. there happened to be a couple of seals on the door which raiken had noticed. "Darn, I'm never going to be able to open the door with those things on them." But as eager as he was he tried anyway.

Suddenly a man came out from no where "Hey kid, what do you think your doing." Raiken looked up at him with a guilty look on his face, and without any hesitation he ran for the door. The man quickly followed him nipping at his heels every stride that he took. The man didn't look like a ninja, and Raiken thought that he might work here but he wasn't going to take any chances. He quickly ran in between two woman who hurtled their books up in the air in shock. Raiken turned his head around still running, and had a little chuckle but he didn't have time as the man was still following. Raiken then pushed through another door and finally the main exit was in his sight. He jumped over a chair and lunged himself forward for the door. He quickly pulled it open and ran down the stairs. The man stood at the door with his arms on his legs panting heavily. "If I ever catch you around here again you little brat, you will be sorry!" Raiken poked his head out from around the corner where he hid, his heart fluttering at a million miles an hour. it was only the morning but Raiken could tell the today was going to be an eventful one.


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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 3:35 am

BUMP ! Just tell me if there's a Espada spot, I'm interested to occupy.
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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 3:42 am

This is looking really good, though you'll need cooldowns on all your attacks, but I'll look at that when you're finished. I'm not sure if there are any espada spots open, but the list says the 4th one is, so you can try for that one and I can see if the list is updated for you to see if that spot really is open ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 3:53 am

Really ? Damn yippe ! Done, I have set cooldowns . Some techniques doesn't really need cooldowns.
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Koori Yuki

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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 4:07 am

I've just asked Sarah (Head Admin) about the 4th espada spot, and if it is open then it's yours as soon as you fix a few of these things up, but if it isn't open then you'll need to settle for an extremely strong arrancar ok? And if that is the case I'll tell you if a spot opens up.

Quote :
midnight cero
A large beam of spiritual energy which has the power of Hado #89. If this Cero would be absorbed, the victim will suffer tremendous lightning shock

how long does it take for the beams to be made

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Name: Soul Power Absorb
State: -
Description: An idea from Bountou. Iris can absorb one's soul to gain their enhancements and powers. Unlike Bounts, Iris' absorption takes a single post to completely drain their souls. Once completed, Iris power will grow depending on the soul he absorbed. Two enhancement per victim
Shinigami - Enhanced Spiritual Power, Enhanced Speed, One kidou
Arrancar - Enhanced Hierro, Enhanced Bala/Cero, Enhanced Speed, One technique
Bount - Bito, Enhanced Strength, Enhaced Stamina, Immortality [Non-aging]
Vizard - One of the mask enhancements, One Kido, Second Spiritual Source
Quincy - Enhanced Speed, Enhanced Stamina, Enhanced Spiritual Power
Superhuman - Enhanced Speed, Strength, Stamina, Endurance, Defense

When he absorbs a soul are they dead, like when the bount absorb a soul?
If you want this attack then it needs to have some serious limitations, like when he's absorbing he can't attack and fight, things like that. Also he can't do this with anybody who is equal, higher level, or just below - so that means he can't do it with espada, captains, strong lieutenants and mostly all the vizards. This is so that he doesn't become completely OP
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Kenshiro

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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 5:55 am

Fixed . But for the second one, the purpose of that is to make use of defeated opponents. It is not like Yammy's absorbing, this one is serious. Once the opponent is defeated or incapicated, Iris may freely use it to absorb their souls but it is interrupted, it is obviously cancelled. Iris needs to use perform it again. However, I can't find it OP since it takes 2 posts to drain.
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Koori Yuki

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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 6:51 am

Yeah, with that second one I was saying it could potentially be OP like if you use a kido or something like that which can restrict movements and the drain their soul without them being able to stop it. But now that you explain that it's used for opponents that are already defeated it makes a lot more sense, because the way it was worded it made it sound like you could just go up to someone and start draining their soul. So if you just change it so that it explains when you can drain the soul I'll approve you.
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Kenshiro

Kenshiro



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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 6:57 am

okay I'll change it later.
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Koori Yuki

Koori Yuki



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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 6:57 am

That's ok, just say when you change it so I know ^^
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Methias

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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 4:59 pm

*Points to himself* - Fourth here. <.<
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Koori Yuki

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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 8:02 pm

Sorry Iris, unfortunately that means all the espada spots are full, and Methias your name isn't on the list so you should get that fixed ^^
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Kyouga

Kyouga



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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySat Jun 26, 2010 8:11 pm

Koori, Kaimei, the #3 Espada has become my Fraccion. Thus, the #3 spot is open.
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Kenshiro

Kenshiro



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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySun Jun 27, 2010 1:39 am

finished !!
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Koori Yuki

Koori Yuki



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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySun Jun 27, 2010 1:42 am

this looks great, approved ^^ sorry about the whole mix up with the espada spots
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Kenshiro

Kenshiro



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PostSubject: Re: Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell    Iris "The Reaper" Ringbell  EmptySun Jun 27, 2010 1:43 am

oh, that's okay . im in the mood right now . ^^
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