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PostSubject: Hasuhana (done)   Hasuhana  (done) EmptySat Oct 23, 2010 4:32 pm

[center]Basic Information

Name: Hasuhana Shirayuki

Age: appears to be 18 but she is actually 800 years old.

Gender: female

Grade: N/A

Looks: Hasuhana  (done) A-1

Rank: Special

Personality: Hasuhana is a shy, silent figure that would rather practice using her powers or take walks than get involved with anyone else at first glance. but once one gets to know her, she is kind,and open hearted with a mix of sarcasim and friendliness in her attitude. Hasuhana is calm and collected and isnt one to get angered easily.The only time she will get angry is when her friends get hurt. Otherwise she hates fighting and will try to get out of fights peacefully as she can. She also has a mischievous side to her that likes to joke around and tease others for the sake of cheering someone up, regardless she is serious and calm when the situation calls for it and will switch her joking attitude into a no nonsense one.when she is angered. she is cold, emotionless and she isnt afraid to use to her abilities if she needs to.

Sexuality: straight

Relationship Status: single

Human Special Ability Information

Name: Snow/ice control

Description: Hasuhana has control over ice and snow. *everything she can do with this will be put in the techniques*



Techniques Infomation


Name: Spiritual energy

Description: Hasuhana's spiritual energy is capable of freezing the very area around her.within 1 mile radius of herself she can freeze the battle ground.


Name: ice clones

Description: she can create 5 clones of herself (or others) made from ice to confuse the enemy. however the clones are fragile and will melt if intense heat is brought upon them. It takes her 2 posts to be able to resuse this technique


Name: Healing

Description: Hasuhana can heal herself and others.fusing snow with her own spiritual energy, she can form the snow over someone's wounds. it numbs the pain as the snow sinks into the damaged flesh.painlessly cleaning it out as it copies the person's DNA. forming new tissue and healing it completely.she can heal cuts,gashes,bruises, broken or lost limbs,and even damaged organs.she can even heal from being aged. It takes her 5 posts to be able to use the ability again.

Cuts/bruises- instantly

gashes/burns-1 post

broken/lost limbs-2 posts

damaged organs/aging-3 posts


Name: ice weapons

Description hasuhana is capable of creating weapons that she has seen through ice. It it is not as strong as actual metal and can shatter easily.however it can reform or turn into a smaller weapons.they reform after 1 post.if they pierce the skin of her opponent it freezes the blood and muscles within the wound causing it to become painfully numb.the numbing affect wears off after 3 posts.


Name: ice dome

Description: within 10 feet of herself,hasuhana can create a large circle of snow to gather and build up turning into ice.she can also create 3 more of these circles before hand. They are triggered as the opponent steps on or is within the circle.causing a large beam of ice to shoot into the air.freezing the ground and sky with the oponent trapped inside it.those with large amount of spiritual pressure such as a lieutenant or captain can easily break the dome those with lower spiritual levels, must find a way to break through the ice before hasuhana shatters it.once she shatters the ice, the opponent will shatter with it.it takes 6 posts to be able to use
this technique again.


Name: Winter's rage

Description: hasuhana can create a blizzard that swirls around her body,she can control it's movements with her hands.each snowflake is like a shard of a sword.if the bilzzard surrounds the enemy.the snowflakes will cut into them unless they find a way to counter it or dodge. After 5 posts the blizzard departs.it takes her 7 posts to be able to reuse this technique.








History and RP Sample

History: Beginning800 years ago,in tokyo japan. stood two Villages that was constantly surrounded by endless fields of snow and ice stood at the center of the forest. the people who lived there were not like the rest of the humans. due to living constantly in cold enviorments, they grew immune to the cold.yet heat was startling to them since it was rare. not many people outside of the village came near the mountains which the ice people lived. there was rumors that the leader of the mountain village was the king of ice. no one really knew his name but he was known as Frost due to the fact that his skin was a pale blue,his short white hair was spiked and almost frozen like ice.his eyes were a striking light blue like the forzen skies themselves and his very breath brought forth a numbing effect on those he stood near. Everyone feared him for it was his anger than brought the avalanches and the blizzards.not to mention his cool nature towards people in general. One day the king was as bitter as usual.he watched his people from his throne. frowning slightly as he noticed the happy groups of families enjoying a day together. The king was deeply puzzled by the expresssion of love and compassion.he begun to envy his people.Notcing the possible dangers that lay ahead. the wiseman of the village in the forest who were known as the snow people. began to worry that the ice king would bring forth the destruction of the land if his mood did not alter soon. Knowing that the ice king longed to feel the warmth of a family;by the permission of the king of snow. the wiseman ordered for the most beautiful women of the village to be brought forth.chained together, the women were forced to climb up the mountains escorted by the royal gaurds. When they reached the palace. the wiseman knelt before the king of ice as the gaurds lined up the women before him. The wiseman said,if it pleases his majesty, the snow king has brought forth to you the fairest maidens of our people as a gift.you may choose as many as you wish Frost narrowed his eyes and sat up from his throne. slowly walking towards the women that were lined up before him. The women shivered lightly at his presence. mostly from intimidation rather than the cold. Frost looked over each woman. yes they were all lovely indeed. Though Frost didn't seem too satisfied with the women before him.until he came across the last madien. Unlike the other women, this one was petite only 5'3 in height. she had a small frame yet a graceful figure. Unlike the light blue hair that all the other maidens had.This woman had long,soft black hair that fell down her back.Her skin was pale yet had a lovely light cream peach tint to it. Her lips were full and light shell pink instead of red unlike the rest.But what he found most attractive about her was her light blue eyes. they were filled with life and seemed to give off a brilliant sparkle when light hit them. Though despite her breath taking beauty, Frost wanted to learn what kind of women they all were before choosing.Sitting back in his throne. he ordered his subjects to clothe them in the best kimonos and for the women to show what they do best.within an hour all the women were magnificiently dressed. especially the maiden with the lovely black hair. Each woman stepped forth one at a time. a few played instruments, a few weaved fine clothing,some cooked,and others expressed themselves through battle.Frost could tell right away that almost all of the women were concided and superfical. disgusted he was about to banish all the women from his palace until the last contestant, the maiden with the black hair stepped forward. Softly and sweetly she opened her mouth and began to sing.she sang a song about her deceased family that now lay burried underneath her frozen garden and how she wished to see them again. the song was depressing and it brought everyone to a silent stop. the maiden swayed gently side to side in a graceful dance as her sad song continued. as the last verse escaped her lips so did the tears that slid gently down her cheeks. As her song ended. Frost looked upon the women. stunned by her beauty and touched deeply by her voice. He knew instantly that she was a gentle kind spirit that had lived a dreadful life.He knew immediantly that he had fallen in love with the maiden.after another moment of silence the frost king finally spoke.i wish for all of you to leave my palace instantly....except you....i wish to claim you as my own... he gestured his hand towards the young maiden who's eyes widened slightly. appauled and slightly envious of the black haired maiden, all of the women left the palace while shooting cold glares at her back. Frost walked towards the maiden who took a step back slightly.do not be afraid... he mumured gently in her hair circling his ice cold arms around her waist.the maiden slowly begun to relax and allowed him to capture her lips in a gentle kiss.knowing that everything would be fine.

Hasuhana's birth and childhood Months passed by as the wedding between the ice king and the snow maiden took place.by this time. the snow maiden was pregnant with the ice king's child. When it was time for the child's arrival. it was midnight and blizzards rapidly blew through the village.the snow queen had already fallen ill two weeks before. With each painful push,the maiden knew that she was weakening as each minute passed. she knew that she would not survive the delivery. using the last of her energy. she collapsed back on the bed exhausted as the doctor gently handed her a soft child wrapped in a white blanket. Sitting up slightly she weakly held her young child in her arms.tears falling from her eyes as they fell upon the beauty of the childs features. it was a little girl. the baby gave a soft whimper as she slowly opened her eyes only to wail once again. The snow maiden kissed the baby's forehead.You will grow up to be a beautiful young woman one day,the only thing i shall regret is that i shall not be there to watch you grow....Hasuhana as the name of the baby girl left the maiden's lips. her grip on her child loosened and she fell limp. The doctors knew that she was now dead. taking the baby from the deceased maiden's arms. they carried her towards the throneroom to where the king of ice sat. to bring forth the news of his lost wife and his new child.

As hasuhana grew older,she knew that her father hated her because of her mother's death so she left home without a trace.she was only eleven years old at the time.hasuhana trained deep in the woods for years.practicing her ice and snow powers.she loved using her snow ability the most because she felt as though it brought her closer to her mother.Hasuhana was then found by the village of snow and when they saw her long black hair,smooth peach cream skin and her eyes.they all reconized her as the snow princcess Who was taken to frost to be choosen as his wife.learning this.Hasuhana explained that she was the daughter of frost and the princcess of snow.everyone gaped at her.not sure how to react.Hasuhana was about to walk away when one of the villagers grasped her arm and asked her to stay with them.Hasuhana agreed. However as she stayed the women there hated her because she reminded them so much of the woman who had stolen the ice king's heart. From this point on, they called her horrible names,pulled her long black hair and even froze her within a cave for several hours. When they finally insulted her dead mother hasuhana grew angry and in result she froze the women into solid blocks of ice then shattered the ice.shattering the women within as well. The villagers found hasuhana standing on top of a pile of ice with the dead women's remains mixed in the ice. They knew that hasuhana was responsible as she gave them all a cold smile to confirm her crime.they all feared her power and ordere that she be frozen within the mountain for the rest of her life. Even as hasuhana was frozen alive a smile still forme on her face as she avenged her mother.she was eighteen years old at the time.

present time
many centeries have past, the snow villager had moved on elsewhere. Living amoung the people in karakura town. Meanwhile as the years went by. The ice that contained hasuhana weakened as wars between shinigami and arracars clashed left and right.some of the attacks striking the mountains by accident, cracking the ice that held her little by little but not yet releasing her until one day. An arrancar wandered into the mountains to find his zanpakuto. He wandered into the cave to find it lodged Into the block of ice. Nit uet seeing the female trapped inside, he pulled his zanpakuto free, then did he notce the maiden trapped inside.curious to see what she was,he further weakened the ice with a cero.awakening hasuhana. Feeling that it was weak. She then caused her prison to shatter and she fell to her knees. After all these years he had not aged a bit which was not surprising since snow women don't age after they turn eighteen.hasuhana saw the startled arrancar who was pinned to the wall by the ice shards.sorry for what she did she released the arrancar.he then realized that she would be some use to him and his group.he grabbed her arm and took her into hueco mundo.she looked around the desert and the never ending night sky.What is this place? she asked the arrancar.he only smiled and said.hueco mundo... he then explained about everything.shinigami,the vizards,the espada and even the former espada.he revealed that he was one of the former espada and that he was taking her to a group called hizoku.the leader's name being grimmjow.hasuhana feeling that It would be a chance to redeem herself of her sins.agreed to join the group.from that point on she usualy wanders hueco mundo.practicing her abilities and taking long walks.
end of History


Rp sample: see ichisake or asmodeus


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PostSubject: Re: Hasuhana (done)   Hasuhana  (done) EmptySun Nov 14, 2010 9:08 pm

Please add cooldowns, preparations and durations to your abilities if applicable. Also please add more detail to them, as they are now the descriptions do not tell us much about the abilities.

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Name: Snow/ice control

Description: Hasuhana has control over ice and snow.she can use it for attack,defense,transportation,and binding.

Please separate this into individual abilities and provide their own cooldowns, preparations and durations to them and explain more ^^

Also the history and rp sample need to be 2 separate things.

I will re-check your app once you have done these changes ^^

sincerely,
lightning
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PostSubject: Re: Hasuhana (done)   Hasuhana  (done) EmptySun Nov 21, 2010 7:36 am

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PostSubject: Re: Hasuhana (done)   Hasuhana  (done) EmptyMon Nov 22, 2010 12:46 am

o.k so all there really is to fix now is the cooldowns on some abilities etc as she is only special human she can't have tremendous strength. So i am thinking that we need to:

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Description: Hasuhana has control over ice and snow.she can use it for attack,defense,transportation,and binding.For example she can Create ice made weapons for attack,create ice barriers for defense,transform her body into snow for transportation,and she could summon a blizzard to freeze the enemy in place for binding.After she turned 18. Hasuhana's body and mind became frozen in its place. enabling her to age any further.she can be killed.though its difficult to do so. her powers are weak on hot days and she is at her strongest during the winter.

please make each of the abilities mentioned on here seperate techniques and explain them better, adding in durations, cooldowns and preparations where applicable.

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Name: Spiritual energy

Description: Hasuhana's spiritual energy is capable of freezing the very area around her.within 10 mile radius of herself she can freeze the battle ground.her presence also causes it to snow.
10 miles is a very large area to freeze and the ability to cause it to snow i feel is too overpowered for a human. so please lower the range she can freeze and remove the snowing part as controling the weather is a very powerful thing to do.

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Name: ice clones

Description: she can create 10 clones of herself (or others) made from ice to confuse the enemy. however the clones are fragile and will melt if intense heat is brought upon them. It takes her 2 posts to be able to resuse this technique

10 clones is ALOT to make for such a small cooldown, although they are weak (made of ice) please lower the number of clones somewhat or raise the cooldown instead. Of course keep in mind that they are only made of ice so you dont have to raise/lower the number very much.

* and finally the healing ability needs to be cooled down alot, so please adjust the cooldowns and posts needed.

That is everything so when this is done i will recheck it again to ensure the changes were made and enough ^^

sincerely,
Lightning
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