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PostSubject: Renzenku   Renzenku EmptyTue Aug 31, 2010 10:11 am

Basic Information

Name: Renzenku

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada

Number: 3

Looks: Six foot three with white spiked hair and tan skin. Golden eyes inhabit his eye sockets and he has a medium build, overall slim at 153.6 lbs, but he is muscular. It is based on his metabolism that he looks as he does.

Hollow Hole: Right collarbone, approximately two centimeters in diameter.

Mask Fragment: A mask fragment that covers the lower half of his face below his nose with three parellel tears through it where it continues up past his eyes. His right eye is covered partially by the mask but the rest of his face above his nose is open.

Number Tattoo: A number three tattoo on his right upperarm, a winged sword with rays of light exiting the number.

Personality: Ren has what some would call a 'hero complex', while not always spouting 'I am a hero!' or 'Hero's never die!' He cannot stand to see others getting hurt and he will usually intervene when seeing such things occuring. He is always smiling and he is a very social person, not afraid of anything he takes to world by force if he must. Ren also gets attached to people who play music like him, as a love for true, classic, and most other musics are rare where he lives. Ren also, to put it simply, a certified genius; as he has thousands of years of knowledge in his mind, as well as an Eidetic Memory.

Sexuality: Straight

Relationship Status: Single, to his friend's despair.

Resurrecion Information

Name: Ageless Etherian

Represent: Pygmy Panda

Family: Light/Holy

Looks: Black circles surround Ren's golden eyes, and his white hair spikes further backwards and grows longer until it is about three feet long and down his back, as well as a black fur growing on his arms and legs, though it is a thin layer of fur it is a solid matte. A golden armour type suit surrounds Renzenku, with intricate designs on it; this suit can take any level of impact without breaking and can protect the user from the same level of impact the suit can take.

Techniques

Name: Light Levitation

State: Normal

Description: It allows Renzenku to control any and all objects, that are in a 15 cubic metre radius around Ren, Ren has complete control over these objects direction and can control them via his mind and his mastery of his element, all of the objects can rotate and move independantly-in seperatum from each other. These objects can all move with the same speed and strength Renzenku himself could move, and with extreme precision; he could put thread through a needle using this ability.


Name: Holy Levitation

State: Ressurection

Description: It allows Renzenku to control any and all objects, that are in a 30 cubic metre radius around Ren, Ren has complete control over these objects direction and can control them via his mind and his mastery of his element, all of the objects can rotate and move independantly-in seperatum from each other. These objects can all move with quadruple the speed and strength Renzenku himself could move, and with extreme precision; he could put thread through a needle using this ability, as well as coat each object in pure energy strong enough to have a needed capable of piercing straight through a building and out the other side.


Name: Light Beam

State: Normal

Description: A beam of light that can go up to five miles from the user that is a foot in diameter. Anything it connects with will be vaporized; the beam itself cannot move however, it simply flies in a straight line.


Name: Holy Disintegration

State: Ressurection

Description: A beam of pure light that can travel up to ten miles and can move in any direction; it will vaporize anything it connects with and is three feet in diameter.


Name: Light Control

State: Normal

Description: The ability to control any and all light properties in anything; enhancing the amount of light to a blinding level that obliterates all shadows, or decreasing the amount of light until there is nothing but abosolute darkness.


Name: Holy Control

State: Ressurection

Description: The ability to control any and all light properties in anything; enhancing the amount of light to a blinding level that obliterates all shadows, or decreasing the amount of light until there is nothing but abosolute darkness, as well as quintuple (8x) the power of any and all light/holy techniques.


Name: Blinking Dash

State: Both

Description: Move at such blinding speed that if one were to blink they would miss it; and with their eyes wide open would barely be able to follow it.


Name: Light Bolt

State: Ressurection

Description: Move at speeds bordering Light Speed.


Name: Speed Resistence

State: Both

Description: Can withhold any and all speeds without any external or internal damage; with the ability to abruptly stop and not retain any damage at all.


Name: Holy Punch

State: Both

Description: Harnessing the pure power of light/holy into his fist this technique represents Renzenku's ability to punch something, no matter its size, and completely vaporize it by expelling appropriate amounts of invisible light speed waves from his hand outwards that move so suddenly and so abruptly it ruptures the molecules within any object or person and vaporize them.

Name: Final Martyr

State: Ressurection

Description: By expelling pure holy force from every single last one of his pores Renzenku causes a Nuclear Explosion that moves at the speed of light outwards with all the destructive force of a Nuclear Explosion times twenty, without the radiation; and more then vaporizes everything it touches. This kills the user, although it is impossible to dodge, deflect, block, or absorb this attack.


Name: Impenetrable Suit

State: Ressurection

Description: Forms an even denser armour made of pure light around the user that can not be broken or bypassed by shadows in any manner. For a twenty meter radius around the user any and all shadows or shadow techniques are obliterated.


Name: Light Mode

State: Both

Description: Turns the user into light that cannot be effected, harmed, touched, faded, in any manner or form. Every single last technique will be avoided while in this form.


Name: Improbable Destruction

State: Ressurection

Description: By passes the effects of any and all techniques and attacks the person of the user's choice with a lethal wave of light that will vaporize his opponent. Can only be once a topic.


Name: God

State: Both

Description: Infinite and vast knowledge of everything and anyone.

History and RP Sample

History: Through living Ren's life was short; dieing unfortunately at the age of 19. Life after death however; he remained in a form of angelic limbo, looking down on the preceedings of life and death of others for thousands of years. Having died in very early times; he modernized himself based on what he viewed and watched over. With his eidetic memory there is not a single occurance or tidbit of knowledge Renzenku does not possess; shortly after his ten thousandth year of living immortally in his own personal subspace; he was visited and offered something. Accepting instantly on terms of freedom the previous mortal man was returned to the planet as a Hollow; the length it took them for him to become a hollow was based solely on his own powers over the Holy Realm from becoming one; perfering the life of immortality. But he was approached by a weird male and directly asked to become a hollow and a member of the Espada; instantly accepting and automatically showing a feat of strength by rendering the realm around him to tinders and spasmodic flashes of light; smirking while doing it, he entered the real world once more. Fortunately Renzenku was still a very friendly male; and lived on keeping his powers mostly to himself except for when he really required them. He made friends, and protected them. His extensive knowledge on every subject has allowed him to outsmart more opponents then one could possibly imagine and quickly got him his power mastery.

RP Sample: en struggled, no doubt on that, Yima was far to powerful to fight however, and since Ren was losing air at each section he bashed through he didn't have much time. He faced twitched slightly, some effort put into a smile as they bashed though another branch, Ren winced, his back probably a mess of cuts and bruises, he forced himself to exert knowledge on momemtum, in a flash of intellect he opened his eyes. Smiling with real effort he timed his move perfectly, the movement causing him immense pain; probably due to some cracked, perhaps broken, ribs, he flared his wings, causing a slight loosening of grip from Yima, just as Yima's grip loosened almost completely for the throw Ren twisted his body around, looping his wings around Yima's body, he switched their position to a point where their chests were touching and spiralling at high speed through branches and towards the ever closer ground.

Light filttered through the trees, shattering branches spun off into the light, and as they fell they passed by slivers of light, the light revealed a deep red blotch spreading across Ren's chest, a rib had punctured the skin, his arm was in a odd position, only slightly uncomfortable looking, however the stream of honey like blood trailed down his arm and dripped onto Ren's wings, dying them red. Ren's good, right arm, was held tightly around Yima in a death grip, his wings wrapped around both of them in an extremely tight grip as well, they spun, and the world spun. Branches shattered against them from all angles, and the ground rushed up to meet them, Ren manouvered his broken arm straight at the ground, a circle of light appeared on it and light rushed up to meet the falling pair, light washed across Ren and he smiled blissfully, where the light touched Ren it seemed to stick, the light stopped as suddenly as it had began, and Ren held onto Yima still, in his Hero Mode for preperation of impact, his hair shivered under his helm and he smirked at Yima. Blood from Ren's arm dripped to the ground, still a minor second away.

The connection to the ground was brutal, Yima and Ren were forced away from each other, Ren sprawled across the ground in massive pain, lightened heavily from Hero Mode, he looked over at Yima on the ground, and smiled, lifting his unbroken arm at him he gave him a thumbs up. Pushing his hand against the ground he lifted himself up and knelt there, his broken arm craddled between his knee and stomach, blood covered most of his body but the pain was bareable, only because of Hero Mode, Ren knew that when it wore off he was done for, most likely going to faint.

Ren glanced up at the huge trees, far far in the difference a glimmer of light revealed Ren's sword stuck into one of the trees. Placing his right arm off to the side and summoned his keyblade, leaning heavily on it, Ren coughed up some blood, it glistened lightly in the filttered light and he continued to look at Yima, There is simply no way he is free of wounds, that would have been an exivilized damage there... Ren winced heavily and look down, just beneath the cloak of light energy he could see a rib puncturing his skin, his shirt was obviously battered beneath the energy and he noticed he had a new wound, a broken collar bone.

Ren coughed up more blood, and continued to lean on his blade, he spoke softly and grating, "How are you fairing over there?" He flexed his neck, and could feel his neck in pain, and everywhere else, without directly feeling the pain; it felt distant, beneath the Light Energy a bad bruise was forming around his neck.
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PostSubject: Re: Renzenku   Renzenku EmptyWed Sep 01, 2010 4:59 am

Unfortunately the 3rd espada spot has been filled

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Description: It allows Renzenku to control any and all objects, that are in a 15 cubic metre radius around Ren, Ren has complete control over these objects direction and can control them via his mind and his mastery of his element, all of the objects can rotate and move independantly-in seperatum from each other. These objects can all move with the same speed and strength Renzenku himself could move, and with extreme precision; he could put thread through a needle using this ability.

When you say everything, does that include things that people are holding? This needs a cooldown and some kind of limitation.

[quoteDescription: It allows Renzenku to control any and all objects, that are in a 30 cubic metre radius around Ren, Ren has complete control over these objects direction and can control them via his mind and his mastery of his element, all of the objects can rotate and move independantly-in seperatum from each other. These objects can all move with quadruple the speed and strength Renzenku himself could move, and with extreme precision; he could put thread through a needle using this ability, as well as coat each object in pure energy strong enough to have a needed capable of piercing straight through a building and out the other side.[/quote]

When you say everything, does that include things that people are holding? This needs a cooldown and some kind of limitation. These move too fast, please reduce their speed.

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Description: A beam of light that can go up to five miles from the user that is a foot in diameter. Anything it connects with will be vaporized; the beam itself cannot move however, it simply flies in a straight line.

How fast does it move? Does it take any time to prepare? What is its cooldown? When you say anything it connects with will vaporize does that include an opponent?

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Description: A beam of pure light that can travel up to ten miles and can move in any direction; it will vaporize anything it connects with and is three feet in diameter.

Can it change directions after it has been shot, or does it have to stay straight i nthe way that it is pointed? How fast does it move? Does it take any time to prepare? What is its cooldown? When you say anything it connects with will vaporize does that include an opponent?

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Description: The ability to control any and all light properties in anything; enhancing the amount of light to a blinding level that obliterates all shadows, or decreasing the amount of light until there is nothing but abosolute darkness.

What is the cooldown for this?

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Description: The ability to control any and all light properties in anything; enhancing the amount of light to a blinding level that obliterates all shadows, or decreasing the amount of light until there is nothing but abosolute darkness, as well as quintuple (8x) the power of any and all light/holy techniques.

8 is too powerful, lower it. Also, what is the cooldown for this technique?

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Name: Blinking Dash

State: Both

Description: Move at such blinding speed that if one were to blink they would miss it; and with their eyes wide open would barely be able to follow it.


Name: Light Bolt

State: Ressurection

Description: Move at speeds bordering Light Speed.

These are both way too fast. Either make them both slower or remove them.

Quote :

Description: Can withhold any and all speeds without any external or internal damage; with the ability to abruptly stop and not retain any damage at all.

He is not allowed to withstand all speeds, please make it a more reasonable speed which he can withstand or remove this.

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Description: Harnessing the pure power of light/holy into his fist this technique represents Renzenku's ability to punch something, no matter its size, and completely vaporize it by expelling appropriate amounts of invisible light speed waves from his hand outwards that move so suddenly and so abruptly it ruptures the molecules within any object or person and vaporize them.

What is the cooldown? Does it take time to harness the power of light/holy into his fist? Please change that he can hit anything no matter its size and vaporize it - that doesn't even take into account if it was stronger than him. So put a limit on the soze of object he can vaporize. Remove that it can vaporize a person - that's a form of godmodding, and if you don't fix it then this entire attack will be disregarded. It may cause damage, but it can't vaporize them.

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Description: By expelling pure holy force from every single last one of his pores Renzenku causes a Nuclear Explosion that moves at the speed of light outwards with all the destructive force of a Nuclear Explosion times twenty, without the radiation; and more then vaporizes everything it touches. This kills the user, although it is impossible to dodge, deflect, block, or absorb this attack.

Please remove this attack - it isn't needed as you already have a lot of attacks, and the power in the attack is just too much. If you want you will be able to work towards gaining it in RP with a lot of training threads, but for now remove it please.

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Description: Forms an even denser armour made of pure light around the user that can not be broken or bypassed by shadows in any manner. For a twenty meter radius around the user any and all shadows or shadow techniques are obliterated.

How long does it take to form this armour? How long does the armour stay in place? What is its cooldown when it goes? Please give it some kind of weakness so that it is beatable and not godmodding - it needs to be possible to break otherwise nobody would ever be able to hurt you. How long does it obliterate shadows and shadow techniques for?

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Description: Turns the user into light that cannot be effected, harmed, touched, faded, in any manner or form. Every single last technique will be avoided while in this form.

How long does it take to change into light? How long can the user stay in this form and what is its cooldown? Can he still attack others while in this form?

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Description: By passes the effects of any and all techniques and attacks the person of the user's choice with a lethal wave of light that will vaporize his opponent. Can only be once a topic.

Please remove this technique, it is a form of godmodding to bypass somebody elses attacks and kill them without them.

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Description: Infinite and vast knowledge of everything and anyone.

Please remove this as you don't need it - also it is impossible to know everything and everyone as that is meta-gaming, which is a form of godmodding.

Please make your history longer, as it needs to be at least 17 lines to be an espada.
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