Second form

Second Form

Name: Spacji

Represent: none

Family: space

Looks:

Techniques

Name: Black hole

State: Second

Description: It is unbeatable. it only last for one post. I can only use it once. it does what a black hole does. yet if someone is dragged in the are killed quickly. There is an easy way to stop it and thats by getting around it. It only sucks in the part where j was facing even if he turned it would stay were it was. best way to avoid the attack is a sonido or shunpo. because the attack doesnt suck things in quickly.

Name: Dark nightmare

State: second

Description: J traps the people in a place then he catches them in one of his wormholes send ing them to a small very pitch black place. Then j starts to make them feel as if there being killed and they cant stop it. it depends on what j says when there in the dark world. it can only be used twice per fight. cooldown 4 post. only way to avoid it is by dodging the wormhole that catches you. also reastia and more will power can stop it.

Name: My world

State: Second

Description: J send the person to his own personal world. when they are there they have 2 post there for both. J has full control over all the things in his own world. He is not able to kill the person in his world but he can severly injury them. cooldown 4 post. it last 2 post. he can use it twice. after this move has been done j must rest or do no attacks for one post. the best way to avoid j during the attack is a sonido or shunpo.

Name: Space zero

State: second

Description: it is a cero like move able to be used repeatedly over and over. no cooldown it is weak but not very week. it is starry like when he shoots it.

No. Way too overpowered. denied,

redone

Half of these technique don't make sense.

I have said it twice already, and will say it again. I don't feel you are ready for a second form at the moment. Please reapply for this at a later time when you govern more skill.

i have

Don't argue with an admin, J.

I said No.

u cant just say no u gotta give more reason at least be better then a mod

Alright, how about this. In order to gain a new technique, etc, you must have a thread or something, MODERATED BY A MOD OR ADMIN, in which you gain said new technique or form.

I see new thread.

Also, the fact that you don't seem to understand your own moves doesn't help your cause.

No because No.

i said i will make the thread already thats why i have been looking for someone to spar with and get it. i understand my own moves.

Don't care. Not right now, J.

Later on, when you become stronger.

And no, you don't. That's evident when each one of those technique descriptions contradicts itself.

dude u r like not doing an admins job right

u see what tessai does now thats what you should be doing.

plus im strong enough and i have mastery of special powers so there

I am not Tessai.

Do not tell me that I am not doing my job right. Have you noticed that I'm an Admin and you aren't?

I don't give a damn if your stats say you are strong enough.

Ask another Admin then, but as far as I say,

DENIED UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE.

And that's my final word on the subject.

hahahahaha watever i will ask another admin a much older one

You do that.

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Name: Black hole

State: Second

Description: It is unbeatable. it only last for one post. I can only use it once. it does what a black hole does. yet if someone is dragged in the are killed quickly. There is an easy way to stop it and thats by getting around it. It only sucks in the part where j was facing even if he turned it would stay were it was. best way to avoid the attack is a sonido or shunpo. because the attack doesnt suck things in quickly.

Nothing on this site is unbeatable - that's a form of godmodding. You contradict yourself by saying it's unbeatable, and then saying there's an easy way around it - it's only one way or another. Not everyone can use shunpo or sonido, or an equivalent. 'If someone is dragged in they are killed quickly', you cannot have this as to kill without giving a chance to respond is godmodding, and you already stated the attack is unbeatable, meaning they have no choice but to be sucked in and die.

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Name: Dark nightmare

State: second

Description: J traps the people in a place then he catches them in one of his wormholes send ing them to a small very pitch black place. Then j starts to make them feel as if there being killed and they cant stop it. it depends on what j says when there in the dark world. it can only be used twice per fight. cooldown 4 post. only way to avoid it is by dodging the wormhole that catches you. also reastia and more will power can stop it.

This doesn't say how long he can trap people, or what people he can trap - someone stronger than him would easily be able to dodge it, and if it's destroyed by higher power levels then someone more powerful would easily be able to negate the affect of the attack.

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Name: Space zero

State: second

Description: it is a cero like move able to be used repeatedly over and over. no cooldown it is weak but not very week. it is starry like when he shoots it.

This attack makes no sense - how can it be weak, but not very weak? Also, you are a human, I will not allow this attack as it's too close to an arrancar's abilities.

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Please respect and listen to all admin and moderators.

This is quoted from the rules, and to respect an admin means to listen to them, and Urufu denied this second form, meaning there is no argument.

Also, you are a human, and humans don't have a second form for the simple fact that they don't have a first form - these abilities can be gained in RP, but it will take a lot more than just one fighting/training topic to gain even just one of these abilities - and even then the topics are based on how you train, not just that you did train.

This application is denied until further notice. If you have any problems with this decision, then feel free to PM me, or any other admin/mods, though this decision stands.