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 Spidex Kuchiki

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PostSubject: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySat Aug 21, 2010 4:18 pm

Basic Information

Name: Spidex Kuchiki

Actual Age: 170

Appeared Age: in 20's

Gender: Male

Division: 5th

Rank: 3rd seat

Looks: Spidex Kuchiki Images%3Fq%3Dkuchki%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26client%3Dfirefox-a%26sa%3DN%26rls%3Dorg

Personality: Spidex is a meticulous intellectual. he is highly narcissistic, extremely flamboyant, and tends to make lewd, disturbing comments about his opponents. He also thinks of himself as an actor, especially when toying with his victims. He seems to have had a less-than-positive relationship with his family member, Byakuya Kuchiki. He boasts that he is a "perfect being," he is a narcissist who judges almost everyone and everything by Ittelect and beauty. Spidex hates it when people are argueing among each other about stupid things. He likes to act as a caring person when killing a hollow or quincy. Spidex hates it when someone thinks there this and there not at all.

Sexuality: Straight

Relationship Status: Single and looking

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Viuda negra

Zanpakuto Looks: A normal katana

Released Zanpakuto Description: it able to stun and poison the enemy when they are cut by it. He can move it with his mind any of the swords.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Poison all who stand before us.

Released Zanpakuto Looks: His zanpakuto splits into 8 swords on one hilt.

Other Techniques: Flash step, Shunpo, Kido creration.

Bankai Information
This applies to captains and advanced lieutenants only.

Do you want your character to have bankai: To learn it yes.

Bankai Description: When i use my bankai my zanpakuto disappears and becomes a giant spider. Its bite and web.

Bankai Looks: Giant black widow spider, Black widow drider, Black widow human.


History and RP Sample

History:
Human
As a baby spidex real name was nick. He grew up with that name all threw higschool. He was kinda known for playing with spiders and having them for pets at home. He had always hated the terachala for it was furry. People always visited him to see all the spiders he had in his room. When he was in college it was changed to spidex Because of all the spiders he had and the way he knew so much about them. He loved the name. he went around telling people to call him the name. He was very smart and beautiful at the time so he had a good life for a normal person. He had many black widows in his dorm as pets which was probably the reason for the name. One day he was ran over by a truck and killed. He family weeped from then one.
Soul
After being killed by the truck he traveled thorughout his home town. He watched as his friends cried and remembered the old times. Sometimes he watched as the spiders would do there natural work and kill other bugs. He wanted to take the spiders on with him but he couldnt yet he didnt care a bit. After one month was over spidex thought life was getting dull and duller. He cried at times thinking he was never going to pass on so he could stop seeing his friends suffer in car wrecks and shootings. On the end of his second month a hollow had finally attacked him. He tried his best to fight him off but only put a scrtch on him. Then a mystrious man came and sent him on.he spent two months as a soul until a soul reaper came and toke him to the soul society.
Soul Society
When entering the soul society he enetered into a good district of it. There were so many nice people there. But then one day he met 3 soul reapers. He had passed out by the energy. A few hours later he awoke and was givin food with a note from the soul reapers. He lived there and people told him about the soul reaper bissnuss. Spidex was then enrolled in the academy to learn the soul reaper arts. So he decied to join into it. He was a quick learner so nothing they did passed by him to easily. he accepted and because of all those traits many people wanted him. When he did he graduated in a few years and was recomended for squad 5 3rd seat. Ever since then spidex has been in squad 5. Spidex is a distant cuzin of byakuya kuchiki. He never talked with byakuya much at all. He would usually avoid byakuya alot in seireitei alot. Till then he does his best to be the best.

RP Sample: It was a bright summer's day in the world of the living. The birds were chirping and the bugs were flying. Everything in sync.Meanwhile Spidex was in the soul society working on some kido moves. He had wanted to make his own kido that would put the oponent in a small world controled by the caster. Almost like an illusion but the damage done would be real. He had gotten a little tired so he stopped for a while. His captain came up toward him and asked him to go to the world of the living for a small patrol assignment. He was amazed he was asked to do so. He quickly accepted it. "Yes ma'am i won't let you down." He quickly stood up and went off to the world of the living. When he got through the senkaimon He lo0oked at the peacefulness of the world of the living. He had a slight smile on his face as he jumped down on to a building and looked around to see no one in danger at all. He waited for hours for something to happen. It was suddenly night and he yawned. As he then heard a boom he quickly ran toward the place it was coming from. In the park he hid behnd a tree to see what was going on. When he saw a hollow actually 3 he laughed and shunpoed in front of them all. He toke out his zanpakuto and said. "Let's make this quick." As he then cut down one hollow. The little boy that was being chased ohhed and ahhhed at the small attle. As spidex cut down the other 2 in a matter of seconds he laughed. He turned to the little boy and told it. "It's time to pass on to where your family is. It'll be ok there." Spidex looked at a clock nearby as it was almost midnight. The time spidex had to go back to the soul society. Spidex opened the senkaimon again and walked in with a hell butterfly. As it closed the wind blew in a peace like way.


Last edited by Spidex Kuchiki on Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:09 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySat Aug 21, 2010 4:24 pm

first of all, make the history at least 3 paragraphs if you want third seat.

Second, the roleplaying sampel has to be with the charather and not something you just copied from anthoder account.

Also make the personality at least 4 lines longer.

And remove the part of him being the younger brother to byakuya. He can be apart of the kuchiki clan, but being related directly to a cannon in that way is not something we allow.



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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySat Aug 21, 2010 5:05 pm

done
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 11:28 am

everything is good but the bankai, how long is the spider out and available for use?
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 11:30 am

Till my bankai ends
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 11:34 am

okay how many posts is your bankai available?
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Neliel Tu Oderschvank

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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 11:35 am

up to 6 unless i fuse with it then it will be 4 added and then 5 added
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 11:37 am

approved
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Byakuya Kuchiki™

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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 11:47 am

Unapproved.

1. He looks too much like Byakuya.
2. In your history it doesn't tell how he became a Kuchiki. Unless you give a REALLY good explanation, I'm not going to let you make a Kuchiki.
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 11:59 am

how bout distant cuz
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 12:13 pm

All right, please edit.
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 12:17 pm

edited
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 2:15 pm

He's a third seat. I want more of his history in the Soul Society. How he gained that rank. And more about his time as a Kuchiki.

And you're a seated officer. You CANNOT have bankai.
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptySun Aug 22, 2010 2:24 pm

can i train for the bankai
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptyMon Aug 23, 2010 6:30 am

Quote :
Zanpakuto Looks: A normal katana

Please expand on your description - what colour is it? How is the guard shaped? Those sort of things.

Quote :
Released Zanpakuto Description: it able to stun and poison the enemy when they are cut by it. He can move it with his mind any of the swords.

Does the enemy cut stunned and poisoned every single time they're hit with the sword? How many swords can he move with his mind at a time?

Quote :
Released Zanpakuto Looks: His zanpakuto splits into 8 swords on one hilt.

Again, I'd like you to expand on your description - add colours, lengths, etc

I'd like for you to remove your bankai from your application - you may train for it in RP but it will take a lot of posts to achieve - bankai can't be learnt overnight after all - so when you do achieve it you can post your bankai in the request section of the site.
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptyMon Aug 23, 2010 1:41 pm

Yes maam
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PostSubject: Re: Spidex Kuchiki   Spidex Kuchiki EmptyTue Aug 24, 2010 6:34 pm

I am just throwing it out there, flash step is Shunpo.
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