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PostSubject: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyFri Jun 18, 2010 6:09 pm

Basic Information

Name: Majeh

Actual Age: 300+

Appeared Age: 28

Gender: Male

Looks: Avatar

Personality: Majeh has a very unquie personality. He enjoys fighting because when hes fighting all his other worries leave his mind and hes allowed to foucus on just the fight. The rush from putting so much effort into a single act of violence and blood makes him overjoyed. When it comes to others he appers almost cartoonish. Everything is either a joke or can be turned into one. He usually comes off as nice. However he does get his moods where hes more of a jerk then funny. Overall if he was alive still hed probally do sutin like a cop in a big city. Lots of action and risk but still overall good.

Sexuality: Bisexual

Relationship Status: Single and looking


Mask Information

Name: Everto lupus

Manifestation:
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Unique Ability:
Shinsoku Shintai - Known as god speed movements this is movement so fast that its compared to teleportation. Its movement past the speed of azien and the espda. It surpases most espada's release speed. However this is still faster. This ability is faster then a release espada up to number 2. Then equal to 1 and 0 espada released.

Shiksoku Chiyu - Known as gos speed healing. This allows for very quick regeneration. If cut then the body will naturally heal its self this is diffrent its takes that process and increases its speed to the point that during the battle if majeh was to get a cut. That cut would be healed by the end of the battle. If foucused upon and entire arm could be regenerated from the shoulder in about an hour. The obvious was to beat this is to strike an instant kill blow like cutting off majeh's head.

Cero shushi - Majeh can fire a cero from the tip of any one of his finers in the direction that the nail of that finger is pointing. Its only the strength of a normal cero however because of that he can rapid fire them. These ceros take no time to carge. Just half a milla second.

Hollow Mask Appearance:
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Duration: 10 posts max. CD being half of whatever the duration warn was.

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: kuro-ookami

Zanpakuto Looks:
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Zanpakuto Description: The Zanpakto has the ability to allow Majeh to seep into darkness. The darkenss can be from lack of light or the shadow of something in pure daylight. The onyl issue with this is it only allows him to exit out of shadows and darkness of places hes been to befor or are within his sight at least one hour befor entering a shadow.

Released Zanpakuto Description: It allows Majeh to create things out of shadows. Such as a addtional sword or a cat. These things only last as long as majeh has watch over them. If for example he made a cat and that cat wandered off. Once it was out of his consious mind and forgot about it. It would disapper. The darker it is the more powerful the creation. His shadow creations can even make "living things however they are controled by majeh so there not exsactly living.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Explore the darkness, kuro-ookami.

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
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History and RP sample

History:

Majeh was orignally from tokyo. He was born into a joyious family or so he thought. Aperntly his father had owed some money to a loan shark and when he couldnt pay they killed Majeh's Mother. A month later when he payed up they killed him. His sister who was only 5 years older than Majeh at the time took him with her and ran. She was nine and he was 4. Leaveing every earthly possion behind they ran. Living on the streets till Majeh was 10. By this time he had spent most of his life stealing and running away. He had to since he was the faster one between him and his sister. On the day of his 11th birthday him and his sister were turned into the cops and from there a sort of foster care system since nothing could be pinned on them. They got shipped off to live with some Ex-cop in Karakura Town. Majeh didnt talk much to the man and his sister was always overly rude. However no matter what either one said the man never stopped smileing. When september cam around the man informed them that they needed to go to school. He knew they were way behind and he would help them. but they had to. Majeh didnt see why school just seemed like a place to get into fights. Which he did often. Constantly they tried to jump him but every time Majeh out ran them with ease. He was fast and now just with his feet. He was fast with his hands to. He could punch a kid in the face and ba half way down the hall in less than a second. Mainly cause he needed to be. Majeh drifted through high school. He was in the freshman class 3 years in a row because he coudnt get his scores up. This madehim the target of a lot of crap. His sister got even worse. She was barely a sophmore and she was 5 years older than Majeh. After only a few years. It was time for majeh to return to the school again it was that september he reailed his sister had gotten to old for there high school. He felt bad and so did she so she walked him to school that day. Unfortently this was a huge mistake. That day after majeh entered the school some of the kids that usually bullied him. snuck out and followed her home. There they raped and killed her. Majeh thought it was impossible. Mainly because it was in truth she had been killed by a hollow while she was weak. However never the less the apartment was covered in to much blood for her to be alive. All that was left of the women that had take care of her for years was an amulet. Majeh remebered it his sister had told him it was a locket she had gotten from there mother. It was drenched in her blood. Majeh took it for his own and wore it. He was stll wearing it when the cops took him away from being the prime suspect. It didnt matter to majeh he didnt care what they all thought. His foster father bailed him out and got him off the hook but majeh didnt return to school to graduate. He had enough with people. The next day he was at school he got into a fight with all the goons who did it. He lost. He spent the rest of the week and tryed agian a week later. He kept this process up for 3 years. When he was 19 he finally won but it didnt matter he had realized he had wasted most of his life. So he ended up just being coaches assistance for p.e. class since he had nothing better to do. Thats all Majeh did for about a decade. He helped out with the class and got into fights constantly. At the age of 28 a freak accident happened and caused Majeh to reach a premature end.

Wakeing up in Rukongai District 75. He was in a small house with a woman who looked his age. It was then that everything was explained to him over a few years that he lived in the district. Quickly he realized that like he had been in life he was going to make the after life worth living he needed to rise to the top. So he became a shiningami stepping on anyone and everyone in order to grow in strength. Quickly Majeh rose to third seat. He had bankai and was rumored to be stronger than the captin but he did not care. Being captin would not benifit him in strenth it would only mea he got punished worse when he did something wrong.

Then everything changed. Majeh had a run in with an Espada who happened to reconize him. When Majeh discover it wsa espada who killed his sister he became fulled with rage. Now he wanted nothing more then to kill them all no matter what it takes. That fury began to build inside him. Leading him down a path of hatred and attempts to find more power. He did all he could. When he could find nothing in SS he left and went to the human world looking for ex-shiningami who could help him. It was at this time he was attcked by an arrancar. After reaching the brink of death he discovered a new power. His inner hollow. I gave him the strength he needed to kill the arrancar. He had no wait to control it. Within a week he was contacted by a group of vizards. They helped him transform into a vizard. Once a vizard the man who had brought him in tryed to enter majeh into there group but majeh had no intrest insted he made a deal with the group. Long story short after he killed one of there top memebers in a one on one dual they allowed him to leave. Now Majeh travels the human world alone. Looking for revenge.

RP Sample:

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Last edited by Majeh on Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:36 am; edited 1 time in total
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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyFri Jun 18, 2010 7:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyTue Jul 06, 2010 1:23 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 1:37 pm

Unapproved.

Edit these things. Im going over older applies on still active members to check for any flaws.

Shinsoku Shintai - Known as god speed movements this is movement so fast that its compared to teleportation. Its movement past the speed of azien and the espda. It surpases most espada's release speed. However this is still faster. This ability is faster then a release espada up to number 2. Then equal to 1 and 0 espada released.

Reduce the speed of this ability and add a cooldown and duration

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Cero shushi - Majeh can fire a cero from the tip of any one of his finers in the direction that the nail of that finger is pointing. Its only the strength of a normal cero however because of that he can rapid fire them. These ceros take no time to carge. Just half a milla second.

Add a duration and a cooldown, also reduce the speed of it.

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It allows Majeh to create things out of shadows. Such as a addtional sword or a cat. These things only last as long as majeh has watch over them. If for example he made a cat and that cat wandered off. Once it was out of his consious mind and forgot about it. It would disapper. The darker it is the more powerful the creation. His shadow creations can even make "living things however they are controled by majeh so there not exsactly living.

Put cooldown, duration, at least 4 restrictions and add a weakness to the shadows.




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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 1:51 pm

Reikou Yuuri wrote:

Edit these things. Im going over older applies on still active members to check for any flaws.

First off thats bullshit and you know it. You did this because of what i said in the chatbox apperntley you were the only one on the site who didnt know i was op so now your bitching.

Reikou Yuuri wrote:

Shinsoku Shintai - Known as god speed movements this is movement so fast that its compared to teleportation. Its movement past the speed of azien and the espda. It surpases most espada's release speed. However this is still faster. This ability is faster then a release espada up to number 2. Then equal to 1 and 0 espada released.

Reduce the speed of this ability and add a cooldown and duration

No im not going to do any of that. Look at ichigo's Vizard mask. It increase his speed for the time it was active. As such this would last for as long as the vizard mask dose. There is no need to reduce its speed considering we have espada that can out do this already on top of that were about to put in a stats system that will make this entire power irrelavant.

Reikou Yuuri wrote:

Cero shushi - Majeh can fire a cero from the tip of any one of his finers in the direction that the nail of that finger is pointing. Its only the strength of a normal cero however because of that he can rapid fire them. These ceros take no time to carge. Just half a milla second.

Add a duration and a cooldown, also reduce the speed of it.

Its a fucking normal cero. It fires like the normal cero. There is no duration or cooldown for a normal cero. And if you look at the fight between ichigo and ulquirroa youd know it only takes a half a fricking second to fire a cero.

Its a normal cero simple as that if i do what you ask it makes it pointless since then it would be weaker then a normal cero.


Reikou Yuuri wrote:

It allows Majeh to create things out of shadows. Such as a addtional sword or a cat. These things only last as long as majeh has watch over them. If for example he made a cat and that cat wandered off. Once it was out of his consious mind and forgot about it. It would disapper. The darker it is the more powerful the creation. His shadow creations can even make "living things however they are controled by majeh so there not exsactly living.

Put cooldown, duration, at least 4 restrictions and add a weakness to the shadows.

No im not putting a cooldown on one of the only 2 powers my zan gives me.
Im not putting additional restrictions on something thats already got a large restriction in case you didnt notice. "Once it was out of his consious mind and forgot about it." How many things can you mentally juggel while in a fight?
And theres already a weakness. Its this nifty little thing call LIGHT!
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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 1:59 pm

Edit the things i pointed out, your simply waisting your time in complainning over it.
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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 2:00 pm

Your the one waisting time. Im not editing because theres nothing wrong with my powers your just a bitch who doesnt get along with me so your gonna nit pick on me. Ive said it befor on resolution. You havent got a clue about what your talking about stay off my fucking threads until you get a clue.
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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 2:06 pm

Only post again when you have done the edits. Until then you cannot roleplay with this charather.
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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 2:15 pm

Yuuri is not a bitch, so please don't call her that. She has her points with the app. However, since you think she's being unfair, I'm going to have Koori or Claire look over this. If they also think some of the techs are OPed, you will have to edit like Yuuri says. Fair? Also, try to refrain from fighting with the staff. I know you have your opinions, but don't call people bitches when they're just trying to help.
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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptySat Aug 14, 2010 8:58 am

Okay, im just gonna post what i think about the techniques by request.

Quote :
Shinsoku Shintai - Known as god speed movements this is movement so fast that its compared to teleportation. Its movement past the speed of azien and the espda. It surpases most espada's release speed. However this is still faster. This ability is faster then a release espada up to number 2. Then equal to 1 and 0 espada released.

Majeh has a point about this being irrelevant after implementing a final stat system. If thats the case, then you can just remove this.

But since there isnt such a thing yet, maybe you can lower the speed a bit, im not a vizard expert, but that seems to be really fast.


Quote :
Cero shushi - Majeh can fire a cero from the tip of any one of his finers in the direction that the nail of that finger is pointing. Its only the strength of a normal cero however because of that he can rapid fire them. These ceros take no time to carge. Just half a milla second.

I think this is just fine. Unless someone else thinks other wise.

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Released Zanpakuto Description: It allows Majeh to create things out of shadows. Such as a additional sword or a cat. These things only last as long as majeh has watch over them. If for example he made a cat and that cat wandered off. Once it was out of his consious mind and forgot about it. It would disappear. The darker it is the more powerful the creation. His shadow creations can even make "living things however they are controled by majeh so there not exsactly living.

Okay, Im good with this, but maybe it needs a little modification like.

Your characters range in using this (How far can one shadow creation go?) and creation limit. (How many items can you create?)

And aren't shadows stronger when there's light? If its all darkness, how can shadows be formed?


Just my thoughts, Apps as good as approved above all else.
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PostSubject: Re: Majeh - The Lost Soul   Majeh - The Lost Soul EmptySat Aug 14, 2010 1:39 pm

All darkness means the absence of light or a pure shadow. The reason this works is because if theres no light then your in the shadow of the world your on at the very least. For example. If im locked in a room with no light im still in the shadow of the building. There really isnt a scenario where your in complete darkness that isnt the shadow of something else hence why that works.

The shadow creations. Since majeh is controling them mentally and not seeing through there eyes or anything once there out of sight. There almost completely uselss lol so thats pretty much the range.

As i said befor its all about how many things can he keep in mind at once? I mean consious mind. So not alot. He could make 10000 shadow things but none of them would be able to move an inch without getting rid of at least 900 if them.

Anyways thank you Clarie
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